Black Poetry : my passion...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, May 24, 2001.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...to exist in a peaceful place where time is wasted in conservation. standing along a sandy shore allowing my mind to explore a deeper meaning. do i dream? everyday, in ways that expand a universal starscape, mouth agape from spectacular visions...my decision to stay amongst the land dwellers lost in the cellars of capitalism is to assist in releasing them from their mental prisons where they spew corrupt jism over the childrens sanity. never wanted it this way and never planned to be. but, the ideals of my constant vigil to purge the demons from within cast an air of sweet sin that questions my conscious hypocrisy. i'm thought to be a knowledgeable man but i've made too many mistakes to be known for my wisdom. instead i reminisce about the sweet kiss of virginal mind leaving behind all of my afterthoughts and preconceived notions...basking in the ocean of my familiar where i can see the swan song floating before me...carrying me along that sandy shore to more peace than i can imagine. then...i lay down my pen and realize what lay before my eyes...you ask what is my passion? to write freely...

    Derrick Jay

    what's up family? i missed ya'll man...
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DJ in the HOUSE!!!!! What up man? Where you been? Bring that scribe ova here and bless our souls!!!


    The Bishop has spoken!!
     
  3. Destee

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    :love: :love: :love:

    Haaaaaaaayyy Derrick Jay :wave:

    i have thought of you often
    missed you much
    hoping you'd give the pleasure
    of your deep rich spirit and flow
    in my house

    this is love

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    Destee
     
  4. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello DerrickJay (DJ)

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    I enjoyed the passion you've just shared and look forward to sharing more with you!

    Afri
     
  5. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Piece

    This was nice..i am really digging this...many of your words like my own thoughts....

    very nice..very nice...
    I hope to read more...
     
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    Im new but I likes :heart:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

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    this was a nice write enjoyed the read....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man when passion flowz it really run free ....D J dope stuff
     
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    To write freely...wow, just the thought of that gives me pause. If only...feeling this vibe.
     
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