Black Poetry : ~~My Painting~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My painting...

    Stepped from the
    easle,
    breathing, flesh and blood.

    He stood,
    full of life and vitality,
    She stood,
    Pure and a mid-morning reality.
    No fantasy,
    No fancy,
    Just fact...pure fact.

    He walked toward me,
    arms outstretched and placed
    them around me.
    Security and Protection.
    She glided in the waters of my sea,
    graceful and lithe
    moving through my blood stream
    like infection...
    What is this sweet confection?

    Both too me on a trip..
    He, a walk through the ages...
    images of the act commited and submitted
    to.
    She by the words on the pages...
    from the days of ancient sages to
    present day butterflies and escapes
    from golden gilded cages.
    He and She never ceased to amaze.

    Am I trapped in a maze?
    Nah, just caught in some Jasmine-scented
    haze..
    D***! My heart please behave.
    It wasn't like they forcefully assaulted me;
    no, it was more like they both catapulted
    deep inside of me...
    He, the Yin
    and She, the Yang.
    The way they enveloped my body,
    The way they bruised my bloodstream,
    The way they fired the flame....
    My body was highly sensitive and
    from the pit of my essence
    something sang...

    His masculinity intrigued and mystified
    me...
    Her femininity teased and seduced me...
    Sweet misery, I can taste it thickly
    on from the tip of my tongue
    to the space where my nose be.
    The rain began to fall washing the
    earth tones and mellow loans a period
    of sugared blindness; I cannot see.

    Her touch, His kiss...
    Hips and lips twist and fuse
    in sweet, buttered bliss...
    A Menage a Trois of three
    seperate entities....
    or is it only one.

    He moved over me,
    She moves under me
    and from their union the deed was done....
    Earth tones mixed with pastels
    brushstroke to brushstroke.
    The painting that came alive and
    claimed my piece of pie,
    breathing and living, the twins, Gemini;
    was soon discovered to be something from
    beneath and above...
    The traces of color in my blood was left
    by this couple.....
    And their name was LOVE.

    ~Copyright 2004
    "kasualy earthy" Publishing
    "Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit"
    Poets are born, not made"
    ~PropheticNsyght
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis tells da story of pure sweet love & affection
    tyte scribing
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this...very well done Poet!!!
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    prophetic...
    playing with that sagelike gift huh ..?
    showing
    love....
     
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    Gee whiz....This flowed like a musical rhapsody, this just took me beyond somewhere....*deep sigh* Guess you can tell, I enjoyed this flow.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much brotha rich!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel You are such a wonderful woman. Thanks
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And you know it deepy. LOL Thank you love
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sigh* Well Watz, I love you and I thank you a lot for supporting me.
     
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    Muse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow that made me feel all floaty...never read anything quite like it. What a jewel touched pen you have . That was absolutely wonderful I shall always be on the lookout for your name.


    -Muse
     
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