Black Poetry : my pace....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 10, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can write a
    love story
    Even a play
    Write about
    love,
    Hate and
    Disgrace…
    I can flow like no other
    But at my pace….
    Let you taste my soul
    Scribin….
    Let me paint that
    Perfect picture
    give you all the
    colors of the rainbow
    beautiful butterflies
    The ocean blue…
    Or just a simple verse about
    You…
    Take it higher and
    place a twist…for this here

    is of me….

    about me….

    Sweet love what a topic…
    Politically woooo
    That can get nasty….
    Or just pure thoughts…
    That will bang your head….

    Dayum!!!!!
    you got a headache…
    Just from tryin
    to keep up…

    Its styles then its whatever…
    Place me under
    Whatever….
    I have no style just my
    Own ways of doin
    My thang….
    At this pace
    Coz…this here is my flow..….
    Getting dirty or down right sweet
    Come taste the sugar…
    I will make you think….
    Work it out….

    just a blkangel thang...:kiss:
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah yes
    i like how you pace it
    and i'm feeling your flow
    as you scribe
    your vibes
    i am feeling
    your Rhythm
    very nice
    wonderful
    your pace ....yes
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was too sweet as u
    smoothly glided cross
    the canvas letting it be heard
    very nice flow
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang this was so so so so smooooooooooooooooooth

    woo
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    but see i aint done yet...
    check this out....
    Getting my flow on
    is what I do
    Don’t bother no one…
    Sittin here in
    my room…
    Listenin to
    my own beats
    My own sound…
    Taste what I got…
    Ouch ya got a tooth ache…lol
    I am sweet in my own way…..
    No rap star..not even a singer…
    I got that house
    music mix rollin
    one two one two
    that’s my track ya listenin
    too…
    speakin all the verses
    I wrote
    my sound
    And my taste……

    a blkangel thang
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh
    see far from done
    About to leave my mark up
    Feel me…
    Let me come raw if I may…
    Excuse me
    This is my mic….
    My pen
    My flow…
    Gotta work it..the
    Only way I know how…
    This is my pace..
    Deal with it…
    Smooth
    Calm
    and
    Its me….
    See I been here before.
    Not spittin no line
    not even a rap..
    Just rollin a flow…
    Feelin my vibe…
    Its all new…

    just a blkangel thang....:kiss:
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no nutrasweet here, but pure brown cane sugah :D
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo I cant stop there….
    Don’t stroll by
    Listen ya may’
    Learn something
    Up in here…
    Pure brown cane…
    Honey snacks
    I got ya…
    Nutrasweet only make
    You
    Ache and
    Yearn
    For
    more…
    I am pure........sweet
    aint no subsitute....
    see I forgot ta tell ya
    I will do it your way…
    Just to see
    If you feel the flow….
    This here is
    My flow
    My pen
    Makin ya weak
    Is my demand………
    Aint no squeezing and
    Teasing…
    Just lay it out
    for you
    Make you work
    Wishin I was close…
    Naw coz
    I would brand ya…
    Mark for life..
    Don’t need no
    bug-a-boo..

    a blkangel thang:kiss:
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooh I like this! and i love how u end it with just a blkangel thang lol. very cute. keep them comin girl!
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what ya still don’t
    feel me…
    move aside
    let me place
    the law………
    enduring
    moving
    and
    assuring
    I can play with the
    big ballers
    and still have
    Enough to work you..
    Don’t get offended
    Now…
    Just tossin
    Some words around…
    See this here
    Is my pen
    My pace
    My way
    I can write about
    This and that
    And still place a twist……
    Now I am turn my mic off…..
    I holla…


    this is a blkangel thang.....:toast: :kiss:
     
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