Black Poetry : My Other Half

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  1. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In order for me to be a SUN,
    I need you as my SKY.

    In order for me to have FUN,
    I need your laughter to get me BY.

    In order for me to have a HEART,
    I need you as my SOUL.

    In order for me to be COMPLETE,
    I need you to make me WHOLE.

    .............I NEED YOU............
    BECAUSE..........

    When my days are not so SUNNY,
    I can still atleast look towards the SKY.

    When life stops becoming FUNNY,
    I still have your laughter to get me BY.

    When I die, everything dies, even my HEART,
    One thing that never dies and that's my SOUL.

    So without MY OTHER HALF, I'm INCOMPLETE,
    That's why I need you to make me WHOLE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    with this surely ur complete and whole
    coz i see ya other half smiling tyte drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very endearing piece, I'm sure your other half will appreciate the kind words written. Flow on.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love the contrast in this piece...
    the simplicity of how simple love can be...
    when we let go and simply embrace it "wholly"

    Very nice poet!
    Sage
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice piece enjoyed the read
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How beautiful it is to love this way, to feel complete with one ...in harmony.
    a glow came over me, just reading it...
    it was Awesomely posed poet, ^5 to this.
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifull Poet.....



    what beautifull is is that you can experiance this poem in to ways...


    as if you are talking ,experiancing about god or youre beloved....




    this was touching...










    we love to hear from you more Poet:heart:








    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  8. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    This is very beautiful!
    It makes the heart goes...*ahhhhh!*

    Loved it!!!!
     
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    Nothing feels better than being complete, especially with your soul mate
    Nice piece.
    I enjoyed reading it
     
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