Quiet Poetry Lounge : MY ONE WISH.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 4, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish I could bring you home…
    Its been so long…
    And I still hear your voice….
    I smell your cookin
    Doves flyin so very smoothly…
    My soul oh…
    How it ache
    My heart filled with pain….
    Missin you so much…..
    Wishin you was here with me…

    I wish I could bring you home…
    It hurt so bad….my favorite girl…
    Miss your smile wishin you was near..
    Your grandson still remembers
    Even though he was 1…
    He talks about you…
    I know you watches over him…
    He feels you too…he says..
    You’re his strength when he plays
    Football….hmmm maybe that’s why
    He is good as he is…it was your game you
    Loved to watch…..
    Oh how I wish I can bring you home…

    I wish I can bring you home….
    Take care of you like you took care of me..
    I pray every night..do you hear me?
    For I miss you and my soul aches…
    My heart is black …momma do you know how I feel?
    You left me and I get lost some times…
    Nothing not the same anymore…
    Things have changed….sittin here cryin..
    As I write this to you…
    I miss you momma..wish you was near…
    I write these poems often just wishin
    You can read like you where here…

    I miss you wish I can bring you home…
    At times I lose it cant deal with all this
    Drama..wish you was here…you would
    Know what to do….like always…
    my world is turnin..
    so twisted inside....
    they tell me you are near..and you hear..
    But its just not the same…wish it was..
    Just wish I could bring you home…

    Wish I could bring you home…
    To be embrace in your arms…
    You tell me it be alright…and you kiss my cheek..
    I know I would feel better….
    Wish I can bring you home
    Wish I can bring you home
    Wish I can bring you home
    Wish I can bring you home…
    Momma I miss you so bad…
    When you went I lost a piece of me..
    Seem to cant get it back…
    Wish I can bring you home
    Losin you when i was 19 years old
    I still had much to learn coz you
    Had so much to teach me
    That i dont know now
    Wish I can bring you home
    Wish I can bring you home
    Wish I can bring you home
    Wish I can bring you home…
    Momma I miss you so bad…
    When you went I lost a piece of me..
    Seem to cant get it back…

    a blkangel thang
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime that piece of the heart we loose
    this was very deeply heart felt and touchie
    makes a tear in my eye...
    da emotions flowin here the feelings of a heart
    deep piece
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have an idea of what you're feeling. This time of year, those feelings grow even stronger. Beautifully written.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read...
    i know she is ok and i know she hears...
    but my one wish is still to bring her home....
    i carry her in my heart...alot dont understand the love of a mother...
    our young ppl need to learn the value of their mother..
    for when she is gone...no one never love you the same...
    they may act like it even try to but no one no one will never fit
    her shoes......thanks again for taken the time to read...
    i know it was long sorry....love yall...and thanks for taken time...:angel1: kisses
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this flow really touch me
    sister
    very nice indeed
    Peace
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Blue water...just glad you took time to read...
    thanks for readin..much love
     
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