Black Poetry : My One Night Stand

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  1. freequeensee

    freequeensee Member MEMBER

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    My One Night Stand
    I did not know this man
    but something in his eyes seemed so familiar
    No I'm not trying to make excuses or trying to justify my ****
    but something about the way he smiled at me
    took me back to a soft quiet warm place in my past
    that I wanted to re explore and that I had to revisit
    **** I must get explicit
    I could not help but feel it
    when he traced my lips with his tongue
    bringing back feelings that left me when I was young
    he had me feeling like a virgin and I knew I would be cumin
    cuz when he touched me he touched me in all my secret places
    as if he knew me better than I knew myself
    or as if we had long conversations or like a brother had been through training
    on how to drive meeee ******* crazy
    I was calling this stranger my baby
    having visions of being his lady
    and before it got hot n hazy
    I was clenching sheets
    In our moment of heat
    our nature peak
    our pulses beat
    finding it hard to speak
    scraming boy you bringing out dat freak
    in meeeee

    seamlessly he caressed my breast with such tenderness
    and as his lips were placed on my chest a sista was **** near breathless
    and when he entered me past my thigh
    the sun rised
    but it was raining on my insides
    like a storm mixed with something big hard
    and warm and made perfectly for me
    and we made love as his bass mixed with my Hennessey
    and poetically we let go our moans and screams of ecstasy
    in our own familiar ways
    this memory has last for days and days
    and I hope it stays always
    stuck on replay
    although I can't recall the name of that man
    I will never forget my one night stand
     
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    Hi Freequeensee and welcome to our world,
    This is a wonderful piece of poetry...and I'm sure hoping that it's just that..."poetry that you wrote" ...and not facts. I do love the way you laid this out, it kept me reading, thanks for sharing this.
     
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    posed this well like how you brought it and laid it down....Angel
     
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