Black Poetry : My O My

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My O My
    What big ears you have
    and you still can't
    HEAR ME

    My O My
    What big hands you have
    and you still can't
    FEEL ME.

    My O My
    What big arms you have
    and you still can't
    HOLD nor CONSOLE ME

    My O My
    What a big heart you have
    and you still can't
    LOVE ME

    My O My
    How intellegent you are
    and you still can't
    UNDERSTAND ME

    My O My
    What big eyes I have
    and I still can't see
    you're not the
    MAN FOR ME.


    copyright2000
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MY ~ O ~ MY

    YA CAN SEE
    MY O MY
    YA DIDN'T KNOW
    MY O MY
    UR WAKE UP CALL
    MY O MY
    COME FLY WIT ME
    MY O MY
    I CAN LOVETH THEE
    COMPASSIONATELY
    MY O MY
    I CAN CARESS
    HOLD U RIGHT
    DAY OR NIGHT
    MY O MY!!:heart: :heart:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey gurl~

    ****! What "awareness" will do for a sista!!

    My O My ~ I've said that to myself probably a dozen times in my life!

    I'm feelin' this piece poetess!

    Thanks for sharing!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    there is an artist in the house

    this was funny

    nice stuff
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My O My, I'm touched

    $RICH$ You're so sweet. Thanks

    N2, You're right about that. Thanks

    So'ja, I'm glad you saw the humor. Thanks

    Madlove:heart: Coco
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MY O MY!!

    UR TOUCHED
    HERE
    THERE
    EVERYWHERE
    AS U
    TOUCHED
    SOULS
    IN
    WHOLE
    AND I LUV YA 4 DAT.

    MOST WELCOME:kiss:
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply excellent poet
    Thank you
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    You've touched my poetic soul,
    poetically made love to my mental.
    Intrigued me, made me greedy.
    Have you heard I'm starving for
    your words?
    Like a baby bird's mouth wide
    open chirp'n, waiting to be fed
    by your passionate flow.
    You know how to take me
    into flight with all your delight,
    always polite and gentleman like.
    For that I thank you tonight.

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz

    You're Welcome and thank you for your pleasant words.

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love

    the way you flo'd this Poetess!

    oh yes!


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