Black Poetry : MY NUBIAN KING (Reply to Brown Shuga Shane)

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am a Nubian Queen beautiful from the inside out
    And I am sure all those expensive things you were just talkn’ about
    May make some women croon for you
    But what if I was to tell you buying me expensive gifts
    taking me on exotic trips is not what I desire from you

    You see designer bags I do have Gucci, Fendi,
    Channel, Dolce & Gabbana too
    Your nose is filled with the scent of
    Versace perfume whenever I walk in a room

    I have a pair of shoes for everyday in the year
    Not week, yes I know I only have 2 feet
    Stylish fly name brand gear
    princess cut diamond earring in each ear
    I take a trip somewhere at least 2 or 3 times a year

    Please don’t get me wrong I’m not tryn’ to high cap
    Just need you to understand all those things
    I already got that
    And they were not given to me
    I get up every day go downtown
    where I put my legal grind down
    So I can provide my own luxuries

    While you standn’ ova there with that intense stare
    Come here…. I want you to listen to me closely
    This is what I need for My Nubian King to do for me

    What I need from my Nubian King you cannot purchase in a store
    I desire some things that are worth so much more
    I desire an intelligent mind a tender touch
    a disposition that’s loving and kind

    An embrace that takes all my worries and cares away
    have me runnin' home at the end of my day
    a kiss that tingles my smooth co-co skin
    and a smile that melts me to no end

    He’s my friend lover confident and protector
    as well as my erotic passionate luv injector
    he’s always on his job when it comes to turn’ my knobs
    and he turns them oh so tyte and right

    He’s honest and trustworthy always and constantly working
    towards his hopes and dreams, because he knows great minds
    think alike and together we can accomplish anything

    He’s not intimidate by my independence or my sometimes
    aggressive ways he knows that I know he is the
    King of the castle and I am his precious Nubian Queen

    He make’s make me laugh and smile and when things get rough
    He won’t abandon ship he will walk the longest of the longest mile
    In the rain sleet or snow and if the winds of life blow him to and fro
    I need not fret or worry because there’s one thing that I know fa sho
    in my heart and my soul our bond is solid as gold

    So Brown Suga Shane do you think you can hang
    Do you think you can sustain and maintain
    I know my curvaceous co-co frame might be
    Making you a little insane in the brain
    But what else can you brang to the table
    Are you willing and able

    Are you worthy of the crown
    That grants you entrance to my my co-co brown
    What I desire has no tag or receipt
    It’s Priceless…

    Footnote:
    Oh yea, it will definitely not hurt
    if he can flo a poetic verse.
    Hey what can I say, I have a
    weekness for poets.
    :blowkiss:
     
  2. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    connection

    i feel your vibe.
    you seem so intelligent and well-rounded.
    i'm guessing you're from chicago or the eastcoast somewhere
    i don't know how young you are but, i'll say about 25+
    you must have that milk chocolate skintone
    deep eyes, nice thighs, streetwise
    tall, passionate and looking for mr. right
    do you wear glasses?
    were you born in september?
    i was, on the 23rd
    that makes me a virgo-libra
    i am 27, brown skin, hazel eyes, 5'9"
    full head of hair and very social
    i consider myself a prince
    because i don't like to put myself on a pedestal
    but, if a woman calls me a king
    i'm a king and she's my goddess
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sha'iyn:
    I hope you did not mind me putting a spin on your piece.
    I really enjoy reading your work. Thank you very much
    for the those kind words. Especially for the 25+, because
    I'm much closer to the+:). So you think I'm from the eastcoast?
    Sorry to disappoint......born and raised in the South.
    And there nothing wrong with putting yourself on a pedestal.

    Much Luv
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ssshhh i know i can hang

    lol

    What I need from my Nubian King you cannot purchase in a store

    love that line

    and your piece as well i wish more sistaz would see it your way

    i feel the same way as you in reverse (King to Queen)
     
  5. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 ever luv

    :rolleyes: oh, you from the south. my spidey senses ain't working as sharp.
    close enough though. get at me sometime shshshuga @ yahoo .com.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja:
    Queen to King everybody is not special
    like us:) Thank you for those words
    of kindness.


    Sha'iyn:
    lol@ my spidey senses ain't working as sharp.
    Its all good luv, even spidey has an off day.
     
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    That was some reply, you so thoroughly spelled it out from A to Z. You want what his heart and soul can bring, not what his bank account can pay for. Written on point poetess.
     
  8. garlicsalt99

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    Satisfying the tricotomy of a woman

    Looks like I have to go back and read "Brown Sugar Shane". I thought of the song "Ooh Wee" by Teena Marie when I read this reply. I'm of the opinion that we should look to provide the things that money can't buy ... the mind and the soul. Women are a tricotomy that have to be spoken to in each aspect of their existence ... mind, body and soul. Focus only on the body [and material things], and you're already neglecting two-thirds a womans' existence.

    The Mind:
    The mental or intelectual part of being of a woman, to be stimulated by, among other things, wit, intelligent conversation, thought provoking topics, and enlightenment [illumination]​

    The Body:
    The physical part of being of a woman that thrives on pleasure, passion, intimacy, carnal pursuits, and ecstasy​

    The Soul:
    The Spiritual part of being of a woman that thrives on affirmation, encouragement, meditation on the positive aspects of existence, a sense of God [something greater than herself], as well as destiny and purpose​

    Ignore any part of this tricotomy, and a woman is left feeling unfulfilled. I almost sound like I know what I'm talking about (lol)

    I like this piece 4Everluv. This was a cool write.
     
  9. Kevin Ervin

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    Many times a simple piece of fruit is greater than any diamond gifted... Simplicity...
     
  10. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well said Kevin Ervin :weights:
     
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