Black Poetry : My New Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tab, Jun 24, 2003.

  1. tab

    tab Member MEMBER

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    Can you be nine
    My new love
    I open my eyes
    There you were
    Standing before me with open arms
    Is it a dream or my imagination
    I reach out to you
    You pull me close
    No, not my imagination no a dream
    But real
    Real flesh and blood
    You take me close wispering sweet
    nothings in my ear
    Making me laugh

    Can't believe it's true
    Won't someone pinch me
    Ouch!
    It's real
    As you come close to me again
    I pull you close
    Tenderly kissing your sweet soft lips
    Wanting more
    Touching my soul inside and out
    With every emotion

    Staring into your eyes
    I see what my future might be
    Still not believing that it is you
    My new love
    Wanting more prove
    You take me down
    Making sweet love to me

    No prove is needed now
    I feel you
    Feel you deep inside my heart
    My new love

    At last you have arrived
    To take me in your arms
    And love me forever
    MY NEW LOVE


    tab
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soo happy that youve found that brand new love...:heart: I like you flow :)
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice description of new luv.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    new love ......nice when u bond and see the love of ya eye!
    tyte scribe Tab.........
     
  5. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we should be as lucky as you to find a feeling like that...love today has been riddled with games that I am no longer willing to play...I want that serious no holds barred type of love that fills ones heart...I want that deep penetrating wet type of love that could split a diamond in two...I want that overwhelming drowning in your heart type love that you can know is true...

    keep writing
    (and don't forget to proofread)
     
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