Black Poetry : my most intense romance.............

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 8th wonder, Apr 4, 2001.

  1. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sight of him
    made me twitch
    wiping the sweat from my palms..
    trying to shake the anxiety but...
    ****..
    he's so fine...

    6 Feet of rugged Black Man
    chocolate skin
    twists and all
    I call him..
    Dr. Feel Good
    cause the stuff he's got
    is like a drug
    and im hooked...

    knock knock
    it's me...8th..

    Greeted by …
    dimmed lights
    Kirk Whalum
    Kendall Jackson chilled

    is that Cool Water i smell boo?
    ummmmm, yea
    i like that...

    out of nowhere
    from behind..
    a kiss on my earlobe...
    neck..
    shoulders...
    and
    i could feel his body
    pressing against mine..
    placing my hands against the wall..
    i assume the position...
    fearing what his next move might be..
    yet eager to experience it...

    zzzziiipppp...






    Then I woke up……lol!!
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Imma kill you sis!!! .... (lol)

    EIGHTTTT!!

    this is sorta like... when you used
    to know you were in trouble... cause
    your mama called your full name!!! :lol:

    now i know how everyone felt when i
    wrote "Yes, Please!" you had me goin'...
    especially with the...
    "6 Feet of rugged Black Man
    chocolate skin
    twists and all"


    it was tyght... sometimes the best
    things happen... in dreams...

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th.....All I can say is......WOW!!
     
  4. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,

    sorry sis
    I wish i couldve gone further...
    thanks for the read..

    Dnommo,

    yea, ya might want to call that hair dresser...
    so when i assume the pos.. i mean
    when we go to church, you look presentable....
    lol

    Bishop

    thanks, please don't mind me
    just remembering a fantasy..i mean
    a dream..
    (lol)


    8th!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SEE 8th NOW U KNOW THE DEPTH OF ME !lol
     
  6. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dnommo,

    youre funny boo....
    think i'll send that same truck over to your desk...


    Rich,
    your too much Mr....
    (lol), thanks for the read..

    8th!
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww 8th,

    Ya must've been up in the clouds too long sistah!!!

    Tight dreamscape...too bad ya had ta wake up!!! LOL!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  8. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,

    thanks for the read brotha..
    its one of those times when you try REAL hard to go back to sleep but for the life of ya, ya just cant....

    8th..
     
  9. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true that boo....
     
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