Black Poetry : MY momma.......................(I see YOU watchin')

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  1. info-moetry

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    Moms got cancer
    I know my inner being got the answer
    cause I feel like I'm going thru what she's going thru
    but still don't have the stregnth to ask her
    how do you think it happened
    do you think it's cause of what your youngest son be rappin'
    or rather his poetry
    cause I know they be watchin' me
    but still there ain't no stoppin' me
    cause of the power my moms put in me at birth
    so I can't switch from that to hypocrisy
    no matter what religion you follow
    thru your mothers eyes you are tomorrow
    even before the name of Jesus was borrowed
    I don't trust western medicine
    but I'm always there with her
    whether physical, spiritual, or mental
    I'm always there with her
    like she was with me
    thru my heart murmer drama
    so like the O'jays said
    I'll always love my momma
    so pardon me if I don't get back to you
    as quick as you think I should
    but minus this eposode I would get back to you
    as quick as you think I would
    but I need some time alone
    to figure this out
    this is the first time I've ever seen my hero in the hospital
    SO LET ME FIGURE THIS OUT!!!!!!!!!
    without a doubt I will come to grips
    and find the foundation like supreme mathematics
    for the mind gave birth to all
    so with the right words we can free crack adicts
    so U.N.I.T.Y
    my mothers struggle is part of a much bigger struggle
    that's how real I keep it
    even when I sleep, it's one eye open
    cause that's how real I peep it
    my thought pattern ain't no secret
    except to those who think they know already
    so they don't wanna share they wanna keep it
    they wanna keep causin' confusion
    but me, I wanna ease it
    my beautiful mother gave birth to me here
    but my mind was raised in Egypt
    don't ask me how
    I can't explain what I know
    but in each in every poem I write
    you can see pain in your baby bro.
    oh, that's if your visions correct
    so do the math with me
    I measure your love by if you cry
    or do you always laugh with me............................

    By Info-Moetry © 2005
     
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    the only way to sum it up through the depth of deep
    feeling and the truth of being for the emotions is high
    and i felt what u scribe ......so it leave a tear to my eye.

    the depth of prayer is passed from one heart to the next
    i feel ya INFO.......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling this, more than you know. So hard to say why things happen as they do. I can appreciate your outlook on this, the chapter isn't finished yet, let alone the book. Peace to you and yours brotha.
     
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    Reading this brought tears to my eyes and my spirit embraces you

    In my heart I already knew...
    Your scribe touched me deep
    I am here for you

    I felt your emotions, and the pain you have been carrying
    I will keep you and momma in my prayers. She knows you
    are with her as she is with you.

    Peace and Blessings

    :grouphug:

    Angel
     
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    that was deep. dont really know what to say. keep ya head up
     
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    Your mom is indeed a Queen Warrior, and that should cause your spiritual rim to trim over. I'm with you no matter what, we all are. peace will surely be your comfort.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with daroc on this one. This was so deep and so much emotion was it in, that I really don't know what to say. Keep your eyes to the sky:)
     
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    no words..
    only feeling...
    no words..
    only tears
    no words...
    only the devine grace
    of your sharing...
    .....sharing...
    thank you for that...
     
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    OH MY- Hetep My mind speaks love- in you
     
  10. Wisdom7

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    I don't know what to say either, because words can't really express the emotion I feel for what you are going through. I wish my spirit can touch you through time and space and give you a hug..
     
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