Black Poetry : My Mission

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dajiboo, Aug 29, 2006.

  1. dajiboo

    dajiboo Active Member MEMBER

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    My Mission


    My mission is to make you wet
    To immerse your body in a cold sweat
    To evoke passionate fires
    To expose your deepest desires
    My mission is to capture your greatest fantasy
    To send your body thru the fascinating waves of lyrical ecstasy
    To take you to unexpected new heights
    To satisfy your every wish with succulent verbal delights
    My mission is to fulfill your every need
    To make sure that all your inhibitions have been freed
    To take you where no one has gone before
    To visit places everyone has else failed to explore

    My mission is to teach you the essence of your anatomy
    To provoke your sensual emotions with my poetic symphony
    To introduce you to the world of rhythmical gratification
    To a world composed of intentional stimulation
    My mission is to make your body ache
    To stroke your desire until you feel it could break
    To implore that you yearn for something far superior
    To insure that you never feel inferior
    My mission is to teach the power of poetic lust
    To teach you things that are rarely discussed
    To present you with a deposition
    To join me on my mission
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Errotica not my fortay but hey you did your thing.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...just as poetry should

    you are on a mission to evoke the mind
    make it come alive
    evoke the emotions and the senses
    and leave the soul begging for more

    poetry...has the power to do all of this and more
    that is...when a poet becomes one with his mission
    such as you've displayed here before us
    I really like the way you flowed the last stanza
    You made the rhyme scheme work...
    I've seen many try this with failed attempt
    but your selection of vocab and focus of message
    really captived your reader

    Very nice poet... got my lighter out and in the air
    Write on...Sage
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love a man with a Mission ...wonderful art and awesome Mission.
    Here's hoping ...
    MISSION ACCOMPLISHED
     
  5. dajiboo

    dajiboo Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank for the support. I really wasn't trying to make this an erotica piece, I guess it just came off that way. I was shooting for something that would bring more people into the fanscinating world of poetry. Oh, by the way Queen, I'm a woman.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oop's ...my bad.
    still a wonderful piece of art Sista.
     
  7. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a mission of wonderful possibilities

    soul-sweet it can be to have a mission
    indulging a mental using a wonderful arrangement
    of words. Oh my dayum... I love poetry!

    Thanks for sharing it with us.


    SmoovV
    aka Cocobutterskyn
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You laid this one down.
    I can dig it!!!!


    Much luv
     
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