Black Poetry : My Mind Wanders

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Feb 23, 2006.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I grabbed the first eight poems from the list. Using their titles. This is what i came up with. Thank you Poets I hope you don't mind. Here is the list of poem titles used. :thanks:


    Our First Date (Thriller Version)
    Howardtsu

    Apples and Cookies
    Dstny

    Out of Body
    1poetsought

    The Real Terrorists!
    Orisons

    Prez bush expressing his ideas on blk folk.....
    PoeticManifesta

    Nita Mae!!!
    Nita

    I like it when you say what is on your mind
    HODEE - of course this guy will give me heart burn!

    CALLIN !
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    Our First Date (Thriller Version). I’m so glad it wasn’t like that. I forgot to bring a birthday gift I bought you. Baby you had on this perfume and when I kissed your neck I thought of Apples and Cookies. You taste so good. Now the girls in Georgia have competition. People say they taste like a peach.

    Out of Body thoughts rush thru my mind sometimes. The Real Terrorists!. Could learn a thing or two. Take some lesson about real life from a gentle sprit like you. That Prez bush expressing his ideas on blk folk..... could learn something too. You ever notice that Nita Mae!!! I’m not trying to change the subject. I know it’s your Birthday. I turned and you were gone so that is why I like it when you say what is on your mind. Let me know tomorrow what you think on the politics. You know I will be CALLIN !
     
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    i like how you inc. and it fit so well. when are you gonna give me the pleasure to flo with cha again. and darn right us southern gurls to taste like peach you betta ask somebody.:tongue3: :tongue3: :ilu:
     
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    That was serious
    Hot piece poet
    Loved the way that was delivered
    Good twist
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would NEVAR deny a lady a chance. To show me her heart, some love and romance. Flow with me any time you please. I hear you NEVAR. Will you flow any time with me please.

    You make me wander, but you frame my mind. :love: I see you I focus. Your beautiful and fine. Intellect for me is an Aphrodisiac. Flow with me flow with me. Attack me attack. Stimulating intense sexual desire. My body. My mind in my life till I die.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da mindful wonders of creation this was phat and tyteeeeeee!!!
     
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    lol look at hodee bear bein all creative and stuff ;) I hope all is well with you brotha :wave:
     
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