Black Poetry : My Mind is Tumbling

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Mind is Tumbling

    The style I invented run a mile a minute it don’t go slow
    So like FloJo it gets gold medals as my soul settles and grow
    Proceed fiery and feed entirely on Hip Hop my brain loco

    Sling a slab of of verbs never prefab words usually stab nerds
    With flavor because of their absurd behavior they nest like birds
    My pride ignored I’m just a sideboard ready to blow up yall heard?

    Script spark even rip parts of ships like torpedos, “man overboard!
    Got a load of strife had to abandon my mode of life grabbed a sword
    I cried commander and became the Highlander proud like Mc Cloud
    In a heartless and illegal manner I was evil planner looking for heads
    To chop off like guillotines it was an ill scene after knife fighting be fed
    Up as lightning and wind igniting the trend as my body grew stronger
    Could no longer stand for a while really wild it was a power hunger
    Then had the worse thirst for water after a slaughter like that put on
    My fitty cap done a city rap then I was ok for another day felt so alone
    Enjoyed the beat down and now the street surround me once more I
    Had torn my shirt, won the battle saddle a horse ignore the red sky //
    My rhymes stocked with hot gifts my plot is to uplift the crime minds
    That are doing time got me renewing my lines chewing tobacco sometimes
    Like AKON I’m locked up they won’t let me out food’s garbage when I dine
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OKAY...okay...i like this

    my mind rhymes
    as life
    intertwines
    with the many times
    she became mine
    BUT I'M FINE wit dat.:)

    RAP ON, RAPPER
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I agree wit Baller u droppin heat and lyrics dat melts like butta
    do it bruh !
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all right thanks rich and baller for the response needed that
     
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    Like AKON I’m locked up they won’t let me out food’s garbage when I dine
    So I contemplate on digestive plates I'm doing 7 to 9
    My...bid is over expressive like a Jay Z hook no Hova Gesture
    My minds perspective is killing right now no hannibal lectar
    Yet some deserve this lecture like hoes I fetch her
    That hooker cold and lonely with that pea brain idogy animal fur
    I don't think you animals heard....
    The flow is terrific and the message superb
    Like a virgin in a winnabago couped in the suburbs
    See I prefer my mind tumbling on rum and coke or some....
    Other concocusion that will keep so toxic
    I can see the birds before the bees I'm high maybe I should stop it
    Because you didn't pay to see this prophet
    Yet in the long run I am still worth a profit
    Did I mention I was high oh wait a minute Rhyme what was the topic

     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dan gthis script moved some people thanks for the peeps and props fo rreal
     
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