Black Poetry : MY MEMORY

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  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember last night like it was a dream…bits and pieces caramelized my mind.
    But, yet I remember…

    The words you spoke to me teased my brain…yet… I remember…

    You spoke to me of my past, mentioned days gone by, and for once in my life,
    I …listened, and I remembered.

    You are a beautiful, and your walk in life is just as beautiful, I see those crooked places made straight…And as many times as I can, close my eyes and see your past, least I imitate.

    Such a man to guide my mind, cliché the passage “the sands of time”
    I do remember…

    I hear many, many things…and I feel even more…I’m SO walking in my crooked places to be made straight.

    I will imitate…

    “YOU”

    And ONE day, I’m going to bless a single soul with a memory of their own…
    Just like You………….

    ©Written by Tia Duncan 4/1/04 @ 8:06pm
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes a walk through the past can be a lovely one, this was sweet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt u on dis very nice
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely posed
    enjoyed the read
    thanks for sharing
     
  5. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for blessing the board with this
    memory lane can be a lonely lane to drive thru
    or stroll thru

    i can remember things my baby has done and what we have been thru and it makes me smile
     
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