Black Poetry : My Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CasualFriday, Sep 5, 2004.

  1. CasualFriday

    CasualFriday Member MEMBER

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    My Man
    I am submerged in his smile
    stunned by his style
    intrigued by his mystery
    you see he was tailor made just for me... My Man

    Handling his business
    Caressing me with tenderness
    making love to my mind
    giving me strength of a special kind...My Man

    I am in love with his spirit
    charmed by his sheer wit
    dazzled by his consideration
    he loves me with such adoration...My Man

    I can tell when he is near
    I feel calmed of all my fears
    comforted by the sound of his voice
    relaxed by his mere scent
    trembling at his touch, with no choice...My Man

    His eyes draw me into a trance
    it seems he can control me with just a glance
    My knees weaken when he walks by
    when he holds me I feel I could juust fly... My Man

    My man is unique and one of a kind
    like a precious rare gem whose value has increased with time
    bearing the weight of life's pressure
    carrying inside the value of a treasure
    not willing to let you know his pleasure
    he is driven by a power that's higher than he
    following keen intuition even when he can't see
    through the forest of life's troubles
    squaring the burden of a man's struggle
    he is truly a victor
    he is a man of valor
    richly drenched in honor
    annoited by the hand of his creator
    for something greator than he knows himself
    I love him...My Man... I love him
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya flowing pen scribing wit depth
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowing enjoyed the read...thanks for sharing!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You flowed this with pride. Such an endearing ode to a King. Wonderful.
     
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    ...and you are a very blessed woman
    Love this flow.../ seems someone has
    found a good thing...

    Wonderful flow Sister...
    I feel you...when you find something
    so good...you gotta tell the world about it!

    @@@@@@@@@@@@
    Sage
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this poem. It had my attention from topto bottom. I like the flow of it. It was so easily to and I couldn't help but picture a man like this.
     
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    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The flow was great and I love the way your man makes you feel. I wish I had lovin like that.

    Poetic Sista
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tyte flow...
     
  9. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel the love for yah man hea...flow on sista...
     
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    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE POEM SISTER, KEEP ON DOIN' YA' THING

    THE 3 MAGIC WORDS, BRINGS WAMTH 2 THE HEART AND SOUL.