Black Poetry : My Man

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My man...

    He takes me
    to the extreme
    wears me out
    until I can't move
    and my limbs become weak
    and numb

    He holds me close... tight...
    and he makes me do things
    I've never done before
    there's nothing quite like
    the experience...

    there are joys and
    there are pains -- I've had
    each with him

    Oh.

    ... and the way he introduces
    me quickly to cool air

    mmmmm. mmmmm. mmmmm.

    ...while he captivates my thoughts
    making me alert; heightening
    my awareness
    ooooooooooh!

    He allows me to do what
    I want to do
    ...when I want to do it...

    yet he takes into consideration
    my inexperience
    and is careful not to overpower
    me with eagerness

    I wonder how long my man
    is going to
    do right by me? I'll never
    know when his type will
    turn the other cheek
    and become
    wicked or too rough
    to handle

    ...maybe even unmanageable

    Some say "ride or die"
    ...for me, I'd rather ride than die...

    I respect my man
    because I know he
    wields a lot of force
    ...and although he
    has no feelings to
    reciprocate in return

    ~I know my man ~
    because I continue to
    learn my man...and I change
    when he changes

    My Suzuki
    My Bandit
    My Man



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you had me for a second

    then i slapped myself out of my stupor

    beautiful ART work here

    loving your style
    :wave:
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL @ So'ja

    Gosh... was your mind in the gutter? :lol:

    .....Hey, my motorcycle is the only man I have ~ :D

    :lol:

    Thanks for the read... and for comin' out of that stupor on your own! :lol:


    :heart:
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin this, sis!

    probably the best luv affair a sista can have...sometimez :wink:

    go'n an gitcho ride onnn!
    LOVE this sis!

    a
     
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    this was Tight!!!

    I like how you described motorcyle man thing. Girl go ahead and do yo thang. this was the dha bomb!!!
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah A~

    I would definitely agree with you on that gurl!

    :D

    One.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Neak Neak~

    Hey mami ~

    I'm glad you liked this piece...thanks for reading it!