Black Poetry : My Man, Your Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naujae, Nov 2, 2004.

  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My man, your man who gives a dam
    my man is your man when I did all I can
    your man is my man when he can't stand being with you
    my man is your man when I can't get though
    on the phone in the bathroom callin you
    don't bother me by shareing but he don't know
    that my man is your man do that make him a whore
    what does this man have that got us acting like that
    i don't know about you but a d**k in the bed and a little head
    your man is my man girl get over it
    because his girl is they girl yea your the b**ch
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a tangled web we weave...
    and what a smooth display of raw, unabashed flow...
    you've crafted here...

    Loving the new flavor!


    Welcome...to Destee.com
    Stay and enjoy the show of love
    and be sure to return the love as it is shown to you
    it is the glue that holds our family together...our foundation
    Also, consider becoming a PREMIUM MEMBER at destee's
    to enjoy the full benefits offered as a supporter of the community

    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=26882


    Again welcome within the family ! So happy to have you! :wave:
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hi: ..and welcome to the house of love,
    very glad to have you aboard.
    well, ...I must say this is on the borderline of "fire"...and hmmmmm..by the way, even "forest fires" ...eventually goes out, and when it do, everything in it...goes out too.
    thought for today:
    :flame: "be careful of matches, that light your fire" :flame:
    nice and interesting piece...hope to read more.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice write.........
    welcome to the house of peace & harmony
    welcome to destee's poetic playground
    welcome from above with some blessed love
    tyte drop look to read more of u soon
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like everyone involved will eventually be used up. Strong, direct blast. Welcome poet.
     
  6. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Welocome Welcome...

    " Well-come " and be apart of the family
    where no one has room in their heart for a grudge
    But where we "ALL" show you so much love
    We're glad that you have chosen to shared your heart
    So now its time for me to do my part and say...
    "WELCOME" TO DESTEE....![/B]

    I absolutely loved this piece this is indeed one vicious cycle
    "KEEP EM COMIN" poet...1
     
  7. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Want a piece of Me?

    Want a piece of me? are you sure that you do.
    I might be too much for you to handle.
    making love until I can't take no more I'm hott like a candle.
    Oh wait it my destiny
    to make sure your well satisfity.
    call me what you want don't try to hate freakin me to you get tried
    I'll let you rest but you better be ready to go again.

    want a piece of me? can you hang?
    but I rather have you standing straight up
    doggy style, side to side hell bump and glide
    I like to ride shifting gears is what I do
    are you sure you want a piece too?
    I'm not whore don't get me wrong
    mother said find what i like and make it last long.

    want a piece of me?
    sucking on a blow pop with filling in the middle,
    kitty getting jealous so you have to play with her to.
    lovin me you f**kin me is better
    no string connect so no need to stay

    want a piece of me?
    if you don't then go away


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  8. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop glad to see you made it.
     
  9. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** that **** was on fire for real well let me drop this here

    Rhyme very quick carry a heavy stick like the Rock on walking tall
    I’m stalking yall this is all real like a small meal my tune caulking walls
    This spot is creepy but yall not sleepy because of nightmares on ELM STREET
    Freddy Crueger stay ready on computer to enter dreams he stem heat
    With knife on every finger one time on Jerry Springer he appeared
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well...

    that was very intriguin. the last line had me in tears over here i must admit, i wasnt expectin that one to come out. nice poem tho n welcome.