Black Poetry : My Lover

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Euphoria, Mar 2, 2003.

  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touch me
    I need to feel you over every inch of my bod-y
    Kiss me
    I long for your lips warm and passionate- ly
    Hold me
    Pull me close and oh so tight-ly
    Oh baby
    The very sight of you makes me ful-ly
    Aroused
    Fill me
    I want to feel you inside me, long hard and deep-ly
    Keep me
    Baby don't stop until it's over satisfactori-ly
    Love me
    Hold me close beside you and embrace me loving-ly
    You're perfect
    The manifestation of my every fantas-y

    15/1/03

    *Emma*
     
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    Digging this... I wouldn't mind a couple of the ly's my self. nice write


    am
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    complete-ly
    open-ly
    i can be da -ly
    in ya mix
    so sweet-ly
    masterful-ly
    compassionate-ly
    caressing ya bod-y
    to a erotical-ly bliss
    i'm lovin dis heatwave of crave
    flow sis flow.............................
     
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    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emma.


    well! i'm feelin' your flow... much-ly! :D

    keep it up lil' sister! i'm always watchin'
    & foreva readin'. thank you for sharing
    this... i'm wide awake now! :lol:

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
  5. Sista Steele

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    Erotic-ly written. Nice.
     
  6. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amberly - thanks for the love. Glad you like it.

    Rich - I'm forever appreciating your replies, especially ones so poetical-ly as the ones above. :)

    Elayne - I've been looking for you. Where you been? You haven't posted a piece in ages sis! Thank you, as always for your support :)

    Sista - thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it :)

    *Emma*
     
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