Black Poetry : My Love

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes i feel lonely, by myself, with no one here to talk to me,
    No one to come home to, cuddle up next to with,
    A shoulder to lean on,
    A man to make love to,
    Someone to be there for,
    But who to love?
    I wanna be by your side,
    I don`t wanna let go of something special,
    I just want to hold on to you,
    Is it meant for us to be together,
    Is it just a sign,
    Love is all i`m willing to give,
    By taking the next step,
    Becoming more than friends,
    Someday the girl u`re willing to dream about,
    Fantasizing,
    We can talk all night long about our deepest and innermost secrets,
    I have nothing to keep, but i do know,
    That i have more than love to show,
    Soon u will see,
    Just how amazing it could be,
    One day, if u allow me,
    To share my feelings,
    My world, my everything,
    My destiny,
    My Love.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You explained that yearning so very well, I hear ya. So nice to read something new from you.
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To My Destee Fam

    Its been a while since i last posted, i've been in college tryna make a living, but i'll be back. First off i want to thank god for everything that he has done for me. Without him, i wouldn't be here. I'd also like to thank Destee for changing my life. What an inspiration she has become. I've seen alot of talented poets on here, and i commend ya'll. All of the destee fam keep ya'll heads, and let god take care of the rest, ya'll have been blessed, and i love you.


    God Bless
    Aaliyahmonet :luvu:
     
  4. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Love
    My destiny
    My world my eveything
    Im ready to open to you
    I realize what you trying to do
    Vision clear now
    Im seeing it too
    I wont take for granted
    What we have is so true
    I will look past the beauty
    And just see you
    I wont get jealous when you hugging your friends
    Im open minded
    Your so special
    This is Monet Love
    Aaliyah dont hang up
    Listen to what im speaking of
    Mind twisted
    Webed intertwined
    Thoughts enter minds
    Indulge baby you will find
    Some love that is pure devine
    A king that will hypnotize
    A gift you can glorify
    My Queen its just you and I
    My heart is just beating now
    Im rushing from the feeling now
    Im out of breath
    Can you feel me
    Your my everything!!

    Sincerely,

    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou

    Long time no see:) It's been a pleasure talking to you again. :) I'm looking forward to reading some more of your work.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much Love poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    allow me in yo space
    to show u da love & caress
    where u can be comfort in
    joy and intently listening
    to ya heart i can love u
    right tight and every night
    ur my dream i vision so long
    may i enter ya home
    we can share love unknow
    together and offer what we have
    if u just allow me this moment
    to express surely ur see me
    for more then the eye see
    open up come to me to a love
    unique & deep !
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im feelin' this scribe very much...thanx 4 sharing

    Peace
    Drizz
     
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    aaliyahmonet, girl good to see you ... i haven't been on here a while either it was like 2 long yrs. I just started posting in end of october i think. well welcome back. Destee is much appreciated for sho... i luv her... i find much inspiration from the poets in here and wish much success and longevity... flow like ya know aaliyah... deeply feeling dis one. welcome back. D.S.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    FEELING YA POET
    THE YEARNING
    GOOD THINGS COME TO THOSE WHO WAIT

    UM

    YOU SEEM VERY PASSIONATE
    I FELT THIS FOR REAL
     
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