Black Poetry : My Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by brnsugasweetnes, Dec 10, 2003.

  1. brnsugasweetnes

    brnsugasweetnes Member MEMBER

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    My Love

    I envision your smile that's silently there
    the love in your eyes you're so willing to share
    peace in your soul as your void is made whole
    freedom to love ~ to be loved ~ to be
    your giving of self so undeniably ~ willingly
    you've captivated me this love that we share
    is truly given to each other unconditionally
    you are the essence the soul that has touched my soul
    you have shared the God ~ within you ~ with me
    so that there could be "we" ~ the time is upon us
    no better than now I want you to feel
    what you've given to me ~ my love as it engulfs you
    with complete totality ~ for this you'll see
    there will be ~ no promise left unrecognized
    no voice no whisper left unheard ~ nothing that is given
    will be unreturned ~ for all this and more
    you most truly deserve
    the memories that made the "you" as you are
    complete satisfaction my ultimate key
    your cup runneth over with pure love inspired
    you are my heaven ~ you are all I desire..

    Tauni 2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this
    very nice write....
    :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    had me all up in it
    dis was awesome tyte
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The cup runneth over, but the saucer catches.

    Very nice, indeed.

    Keep 'em coming.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving your style

    so full of passion...

    this piece radiates contentment...

    there's nothing better than
    undeniable, uninhibited...True Love
    flow on sister...flow on...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow sister theres no holdin u down is there :D
    lovin the vibe gurl jus lovin it...and the avatar is nice too :D
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very passionately written. Flow on.
     
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