Black Poetry : MY LOVE

[MsGhettoPoet]

My love has been taken shaken and thrown around
Hit on, spit on and stomped on the ground
It's been put up-- and its been shot down
Dont know if my loves ready for another round.....
n*ccas cum thru in the mix
Playin mad head tricks
Lyin on their love.....
So that their d*ck benefits :flame:
My love has been worn and torn
Sweet like a rose with pain like a thorn
Its been drowned, not allowed to breathe
Will my love ever get sum peace?? :uhoh:
Cuz the good times are negative
And the bad ones increase
Is love really real? or is it fair to say
That its juss a word...used in vain?
Used in songs, written in poems
Books about it, I got a list...I can go on and on
You love those shoes and u love that hat
But when will u be able to luv sum1 back??
Honestly and truly, w/o making it hurt
And not makin em feel like theyre as low as the dirt
And not tellin lies tryna get up a skirt
If ur not gonna be real, then wuts the use?
Even tho its not physical, its emotional abuse :fight:
And that could be the worst of all....
While ur out there having a ball
We try to understand ur words.....but alas........we fall
Into darkness, thru that big black door
And our love has been shattered once more

PLEEEEEEEZ........

Juss keep ur feelings pure and act mature

 

[MzBlkAngel]

not physical, its emotional abuse
And that could be the worst of all....

those words stuck out
most dont know when
they are being abused
some think its a form of love...
until its almost to late when they wake up

i like ya poem
flow on....

 

[MrGhettoPoet]

dang girl....i can feel the pain in your words keep it up and stay strong