Black Poetry : MY LOVE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsGhettoPoet, Nov 19, 2003.

  1. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My love has been taken shaken and thrown around
    Hit on, spit on and stomped on the ground
    It's been put up-- and its been shot down :uzi:
    Dont know if my loves ready for another round.....
    n*ccas cum thru in the mix
    Playin mad head tricks
    Lyin on their love.....
    So that their d*ck benefits :flame:
    My love has been worn and torn
    Sweet like a rose with pain like a thorn
    Its been drowned, not allowed to breathe
    Will my love ever get sum peace?? :uhoh:
    Cuz the good times are negative
    And the bad ones increase :bawling:
    Is love really real? or is it fair to say
    That its juss a word...used in vain?
    Used in songs, written in poems
    Books about it, I got a list...I can go on and on
    You love those shoes and u love that hat
    But when will u be able to luv sum1 back??
    Honestly and truly, w/o making it hurt
    And not makin em feel like theyre as low as the dirt
    And not tellin lies tryna get up a skirt
    If ur not gonna be real, then wuts the use?
    Even tho its not physical, its emotional abuse :fight:
    And that could be the worst of all....
    While ur out there having a ball
    We try to understand ur words:confused:.....but alas........we fall
    Into darkness, thru that big black door
    And our love has been shattered once more

    PLEEEEEEEZ........

    Juss keep ur feelings pure and act mature
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not physical, its emotional abuse
    And that could be the worst of all....

    those words stuck out
    most dont know when
    they are being abused
    some think its a form of love...
    until its almost to late when they wake up

    i like ya poem
    flow on....
     
  3. MrGhettoPoet

    MrGhettoPoet New Member MEMBER

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    dang girl....i can feel the pain in your words keep it up and stay strong
     
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