Black Poetry : my love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LadySag, Oct 19, 2003.

  1. LadySag

    LadySag Member MEMBER

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    My love doesn't come from some "How to fall in Love" article in some popular monthly magazine.
    And it doesn't come from some American romance scene based on a top selling novel now showing at your local theare screen.
    Though to you it may seem most women are out for the green materialistic things you can bring Louis Vuitton and diamond rings
    My love comes from the same place rainbows come from and angels sing
    My love doesn't come from some R&B hip hop artist hook
    or some men vs. women survey in the middle of a book
    my love doesn't care about your outer looks
    Honesty... trust... and time is all it really took
    for you to share my love
    for you to bare your love
    never tear my love
    beware never compare me
    to some ex who treated you unfairly
    that was then and this is now
    let's figure out how
    to make this last
    without bringing up the past
    I understand you've been hurt before
    But understand I've been hurt some more
    so lets heal together
    and try to make this last forever
    cause my love doesn't come from what he did and what he's done
    but my love comes from a palce where stars kiss the sun.
    my love...
    to be continued....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin ........very nice flow
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...cant wait for the rest...peace
     
  4. Deasia

    Deasia Active Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed your scribe of love and am
    anticipating the continuation...
     
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