Black Poetry : My love where are you?

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My love I wanna know where you are?
    Are you among the bright stars
    I'm so anxious for you to rock my world
    To be your lover and confidant your girl
    I'm so ready for you to appear
    I can almost smell your prescence so near
    So near to my heart that it just ache
    I promise the love I'll give will be real and not fake
    I waited so long for you to arrive
    Now that my life has taken a nosedive
    I want you to save me from this ol' world
    Since the pieces of me seems to unfurl
    I'm asking you to show what love is really about
    All this stress and worrying has me wanting to shout
    I had enough of this rain please lets some sunshine in my life
    My love where are you I'm ready to become your wife
    Be my Moses deliver me let me escape
    Cause the system so much has rape (me)
    The love, strength, devotion that I so carried like armor
    Right now I'm asking you to be my farmer
    Harvest all things I need to get by
    Help me to end these late night cries
    Love please come right away to set me free
    I so want to be made whole brand new feeling complete

    My Love where are you?
     
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    NevAR..
    I is my love too far away..
    nevarr..
    Are our troubles to big to pray...
    Nevar...
    will you be without doubt..
    Nevar..
    ..

    My love is here...
    and it shall Nevar leave you!
    :kiss1:
     
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    Hi nevar
    i am really enjoying your poem
    it's like a prayer
    a wishful wish
    this is a very
    sincere piece
    filled with
    longing
    hope and faith
    Peace
     
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    Theres one love you never have to look for
    or have to hope upon...

    without a doubt...God loves you
    never look for a man to fill a void
    that God so much want to fill
    Just ask and you shall recieve
    everlasting love.....

    i like this vibe poet...flow on...

    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. nevar

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    i thankyou for your kind thoughts
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i also want to thankyou for taking the time out to read my piece. i appreciate the love.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know that with God he will neva steer me wrong
    But I can't help yearn for that special one
    I know that He will never leave my side
    But then again I need that special one to confide
    Ms. Angelz please understand this desire that burns inside of me
    I know deep inside a man won't make me complete
    But then again I need to feel love and wanted
    I know with my Heavenly Father he won't put on a front
    So I ask you my sister to comfort me only a sister would
    I poured and bared my soul I hope that you understood
    That I won't to share and give that love I long for
    But then again my Heavenly Father would give me much more
    My sister I ask now to pray for me each and every night
    Would you ask him for me to give me the strenght to fight
    The urges that so wont to keep me down
    I think that special will wipe away my frowns
    But then again I realize that sometimes in life you must
    go through the good or bad
    Living your life mad or sad
    But then again I'm still wondering "Where is my love"?


    Thanks for your input Angelz:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Not far yet near
    to caress and fill u in cheer
    thy love is above
    sitting high watching low
    ready to go down to da core
    he hear your whisper
    and know yo heart
    he's not that far apart
    feeling ya essence and embrace
    and now ready to come upon ya face
    hold on and keep da faith
    for thy love is in da secret place
    he's near and yet a mystery !
     
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    Not far but yet not near
    Could it be your the one to erase all my fear
    To hold me, caress me like no other
    Are you that somebody who's going to help me discover
    What true love and happiness may lie
    Will I ever experience true meaning of happiness before I die
    Is it you who will watch with me as the sun set
    Will you show or give me the reason to neva forget
    That with perserverence all the good will come through
    You will love me for who I am and my point of views
    Rich could it be that your are my love I been waiting for
    Could it be you who is willing and able to give so much more
    Please my King I bow before your feet
    Will I see your strong desires or will we ever meet
    I ask right now all who is looking at this now

    Are you the love I've been waiting for?

    To my windy city who's this G.A. peach is keeping this thing nice and pretty.:hearts1:
     
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    Ga Peach nice & sweet
    what u seek is before thee
    forth i am what i am to be
    and the core of mystery
    forth thy love awaits
    in the harp of secret place
    upon u will be no fear
    just the arms of loving care
    to shelter and harbor
    in happiness when time is near
    you will feel rejoice and cheer
    for true love is really dear
    from above as sun set
    i watch and da warmth you
    your never forget forth i am
    when u close ya eye u will see
    the true King ya heart bring
    and your love that now sing
    in da air i hear it ring from da
    southern skies to da northern
    winds in grasp i am that i am
    forth ya heart will feel and ya soul
    will yearn to a divine burn and
    there only there u will see .
    Now close ya eye and get your
    true answer it's there only there
    from da windy city sweeper.......
     
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