Black Poetry : ...my love...known

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  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...my love
    known...
    i have observed
    you in various
    ways...
    from afar...
    and yes, i am thinking
    about, only
    you

    within the mist of
    our being
    you
    and i know
    this is worth
    seeing it through
    ...to the next level

    ...i am ready...

    i can't say
    what i will do when
    my brown eyes
    look at you...
    or where my
    caramel colored
    hands will begin
    to explore
    you...

    the anticipation
    of feeling my skin
    touching your skin
    brings to mind
    fantasies when we
    ...no you...
    ...well, i....i think
    you know what i mean...

    seeing your smile
    and tasting your lips
    will ignite internal
    rockets of pleasure
    ...and other things too

    ...my love
    known...
    i am thinking
    about, only
    you :heart:

    MsDLite (c) 02.01
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i love these lines ...

    fantasies when we
    ...no you...
    ...well, i....i think
    you know what i mean...


    your poetry makes me smile
    very nice MsDLite!

    Destee
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Delight my Night

    Girl you really know how to bring delight into a man's heart....I'm loving this piece...
     
  4. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...i smile as you read my humble writing of
    things mental...


    many thanks, as always, while i simply...share
     
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    this was a sensual read that i enjoyed :) scribe on my sista
     
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    Laydee Chups Active Member MEMBER

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    I dunna. It was kind of......(searching for a word)........ cute?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know what dis did too me.....u bring a passion of flava
    that makes a man heart jump 50 beatz ........wow!
     
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