Black Haiku : My Love Have A Cost

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You brought me a bear
    and a bag of chocolate hearts
    You whisper love U

    I listen to the
    for give me baby please please
    And I just listen

    I'm not being cold
    I'm just being more caution
    So just keep trying

    My love have a cost
    You have a long way to go
    My love have a cost
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Little teddy bears
    chocolate treats whispers of
    love and plea thy cast

    Truely not enough
    for the price of yo sweetheart
    wont try to buy,but

    Devotional love
    uplifting spirit of warmth
    to gain your true heart
     
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    Heartfelt gifts are sweet
    But what is sweeter still, are
    gifts money can't buy
     
  4. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    to the point...

    I'm really enjoying and appreciating you Sister BlueWater...

    everytime I read you.. I get something ...

    man so so many special and talented writers...

    I feel like a kid in a candy store...

    you shining ... on fiya!

    oooh... sorry

    i won't pay the price
    if my cost for you seems high
    my love is priceless

    my love have a cost
    a high regard for myself
    my love have a cost
     
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    One of these days I'm gonna step out of the play pen, put my bottle of Similac down and kick it with the big dogs and spit some Haiku...but until then (lol)...I'm just gonna enjoy your work...

    Sis. Bluewater...all I can say is you've got some serious talent...I'm taking notes (you too Miss Lady - sittin' back in the cut)!
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    oh... join in grl...

    u know u got skillz....

    grl i'm taking notes from u!!!
     
  7. Bluewater

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    Hey Sisters
    It all so good,
    just feel and go with it

    My Love have a cost
    You tried to damage my heart
    The price, very HIGH

    My Love have a Cost
    Trying to renew the lease
    Why should I save it?

    My Love Have A Cost
    Respect the woman I am
    Can You Afford me?
     
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    re; hi

    good-afternoon Bluewater,


    still on the board...


    ==
    ==
    You brought me a bear
    and a bag of chocolate hearts
    You whisper love U

    I listen to the
    for give me baby please please
    And I just listen


    I'm not being cold
    I'm just being more caution
    So just keep trying

    My love have a cost
    You have a long way to go
    My love have a cost
    ==
    ==


    you painted reality sweetie, as it sad how men will literally abuse their mate... whether it be verbally or physically... not truly treating her like the queen in which she is... candy nor flowers can heal a broken heart... in all many can utter those words; I LOVE U, but only a few can back it up, as i always let my actions speak on thy behalf... in all, it's been a pleasure witnessing thy growth as a poetess...


    have a nice day...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///

     
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    Impressive...

    a woman who knows her worth.

    Nice to read you again, Blue!


    SmoovV
     
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    Love not Lost
    But worth the Cost
    More pennies to the Well

    Lost out Love
    No Luscious Lust
    My Love....Has a Cost
     
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