Black Poetry : My Love for Her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blacklove, Jan 28, 2003.

  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    There is this girl i love so dear,
    I get nervous all the time when she is near.
    If i could I'd cry for her,
    If she told me to I'd die for her.

    I remember the times when i wanted to kill myself
    But then she came into my life and gave me reasons to love myself.
    Now she's gone- she set me free
    And every night i pray that she'll come back to me.

    Words and phrases were said that werent meant to be
    i just wish i could take them away so she could stay with me
    Im sorry i lied to her that one night
    I never realized it would turn into a big fight

    If i could I'd let her know
    That loving her is like food to my soul
    I'd also let her know- she's the queen of my heart
    Her love is like tears from the stars

    Everyone deserves a second chance
    I wish i could of told her that when i was her man
    The thing that im saying is- my love for her is so strong
    It'll be that way for as long as my life goes on.

    :love: :luv:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one's love surely real
    i understand how u feel
    but life moves on
    no need to stall
    give her warm lovin call

    thanks for sharing ya true emotions
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow brother. God blessing, she'll hear your calls. Don't give up...some of the best things are born out of persistence plus patience

    peace
    blak
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blacklove blacklove............should be more replies to this
    nice ****
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling this blacklove.... I can defintely relate!!!! Loved the flow!!
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is a gift from heaven
     
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    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is really a nice piece
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blacklove,

    Nice!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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