Black Poetry : My love for a Poet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Jun 2, 2002.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We first met
    As our eyes glanced off each others words
    Across a crowded forum
    Something in your use of the vernacular
    Caught my attention
    The love so obvious in your words
    Kept my attention
    The passion from your pen
    Ignited my fantasies
    And when finally we spoke
    One on one
    My heart melted
    Together we created magic
    A spell was cast
    And after awhile the distance
    Between our physical
    No longer mattered
    We dance
    You and I
    To a song only we can hear
    We sway to jazz tunes playing in our souls
    We inhale the soft jasmine scents
    Floating across time zones
    Our thoughts take us to a place
    We could have only imagined
    Everyday brings about new hopes
    Crazy dreams of together and happily ever-after’s
    I close my eyes at night and dream
    Of you
    Of me
    Of the us that we have created
    I know its silly
    I know its crazy
    I know……
    But
    My soul was created
    For you to write pretty words about
    My heart beats
    So that your pen can draw it
    My smile is for you alone
    Its sunshine captured, scanned, emailed and printed
    For your sole enjoyment
    You have awakened in me a craving
    For a special love
    That only you can satisfy

    Natasha :heart:
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so write on. Beautiful! :)
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tell that man how you feel girl!!!
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooh yes!

    Alyce
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stranger things have been know to happen!

    say it! flow it! show it!:love:
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was so beautifully written
    lovin this flow
     
  7. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautiful story, beautifully written.

    BE
     
  8. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    A love story that many of us wish was reality. falling in love with the spirit of another. thank you
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with everyone else before me. nat, this piece is truly lovely. yes, indeed. it's funny how beautiful love can be scribed. and it's beautiful how a poet can just make you feel and just be.


    ~~~myndwaves~~~
     
  10. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blessings on this piece lovely
    Desert Storm
     
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