Black Poetry : MY LOVE: BOTTLED UP, BUT THE SEALS BEEN BROKEN: WHAT A MESS!

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEE IM PISSED OFF,
    WITH MY HEART IN MY HANDS,
    MY SOUL IS TORN,
    BECAUSE YOUR HEART CANT GIVE,
    WHAT MINE DEMANDS,
    TIRED OF THE NEGLIGENCE,
    I PUT IN WORK,
    AND YOU ENJOY THE RIDE,
    I WONT QUIT,
    CAUSE IT WOULD RUIN MY PRIDE,
    IM GOING TO SIT BACK,
    AND WITH MY HEAD HELD HIGH,
    PRAY TO GOD; AS i LOOK @ THE SKY,
    i GET ON MY KNEES,
    TO SAVOR WHAT HASNT BEEN LOST,
    IM GOING TO "DO ME," AS BEST AS I CAN,
    LIKE SALT & PEPPA "I GOTTA MAN"
    AND HIS NAME IS GOD,
    HE STUCK IT OUT,
    WHEN TIMES WERE HARD,
    sO WITH MY NEW CAREER,
    N APARTMENT IN THE SKY,
    ONE DAY YOU WILL LOOK BACK,
    ASK YOURSELF; HOW & WHY?
    I WANT TO SEE YOU MAKE MONEY,
    SUCCED IN LIFE,
    AND THEY WANT TO SPEND AND TAKE IT,
    I WANTED US TO PARTNER UP;
    YES I'LL BE YOUR WIFE
    TO MAKE IT,
    WITHOUT PAIN AND STRIFE,
    BUT IM GLAD YOU HAVE YOUR PRIORTIES STR8.
    NOW I DONT HAVE TO "FAKE IT"

    :donttell:
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: my Love

    This is an excellent poem .
     
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    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im lovin it. je' tem! snaps
     
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    woo,

    The cat is out the bag on this one. The writer succeded in getting the reader to feel thier pain and their new found happiness in G-d.
    G-d should and always is the head of our lives..
    Thanks for sharing...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    letting it all out on the line now !
    a outstanding piece..................
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tHANK YALL FOR THE LOVE, IM GLAD I WAS ABLE TO CAPTURE THE FRUSTRATION IN PIXELS, LOL... I WOULD HAVE SAID INK.. BUT WERE ON THE NET.. LOL.. SILLY ME :slobber:..
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Yes i am feeling this awesome poem!!!!
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you, you know you my sister in poetry rite! :fairy:
     
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    that was priceless,...i cant believe they still make yous..........i thought woman of ur caliber were myths....lol...nice scribe ma...i feel u souldeep........
     
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    GOOD GOD

    GOD, IS GOOD. :spin:
     
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