Black Poetry : MY LOVE (a note)

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  1. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My love is
    U
    my heart was taken
    within yo whispers
    i lay in yo sounds
    yet unheard my body
    yearn for the true u
    yet i am unknown to
    the essence of yo love
    in the darkness of these 4 walls
    the chamber door closed tight
    i fight my soul in sadness
    yet smile in thoughts of thee
    maybe
    someday
    somehow
    somewhere
    we will meet
    til that notion of reality
    my love will wait under yo wings
    and sing the song by the way!
    i've fallin' in love wit ya .
    remembering
     
  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    P-Master that was simply beautiful....
    moving.....

    8th!!
     
  3. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my 8th wonder thank u
    but have i told u lately ya
    b~e~a~u~t~i~f~u~l
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    open the doors
    let the light in
    the day is now
    the place is here

    agreeing with 8th Wonder
    simply beautiful

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smilin so hard it hurts!!

    naw, but you just did.....
    (velveeta)!!

    8th!!
     
  6. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to the Queens of soul
    my love has a mind of its own
    and it can run deep.....
    destee u r beautiful
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful, dear poetic kang. very enjoyable piece. now, i wonder if she knows how lucky she is??? smiles to you, dear poet.
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PM (my Nubian Kang)...

    i have to agree with all those
    before me... this was simply
    beautiful... she is lucky indeed!

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  9. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks lister yo words is a comfort
    i hope some day she will know my love


    sunshyne now u know who she be
    shyning upon me and o~how i love it.
     
  10. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as i captured u inside me i see
    the master u r of love
    u take me in the essence of u
    as u love in yo every whispers
    yes!!
     
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