Black Poetry : My Lord Thank You

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dig Deep For This One!!!

    Like a book
    Sometimes never ending
    Sometimes take a second look
    The drama I faced as a teen
    Made me the evilist thing
    Father used to beat me
    Before I became a bastard
    Look at him different
    Cause I grew up a bastard
    Now that there is no love
    He sitting back reacting
    Thinking im gone hurt him
    I have brushed off my past man
    My mother was my father
    So f--- yo a-- man
    My heart so cold
    You can see the ice man
    I call myself the snowman
    Cause the soul so dark
    How you feel
    I got the whole world im not scared
    I read a scripture in revelations
    I think I might have to repent
    Thats hell yeah
    The southside never had love for the west man
    I look past the crap and chill
    Im not scared
    I got see blocks beefing for a braud
    They out there
    Young boy just got shot
    Cause he was dating some young chick
    The brother didnt like it so he off
    He lights sh--
    I made the block turn when I had that night switch
    I run up flick it once
    And thats your life see
    I come from a different breed of brothers
    They out here
    Im a pretty boy
    Evil streak for sure
    Im out here
    Blistering cold
    No shoulder to cry
    Im 27 who gives a yup if I die
    I could turn a grave
    Put myself in depression
    Someone get me out
    Give me some water
    Slap my face right now
    Im shaking from the gate
    Not knowing what going to happen next
    My life is like hannibal
    No lecture-Im speaking to you
    This is not a lecture
    The is an independent statement
    Preaching to you
    Fundamentals reaching to you
    I have a story that is so true
    A bot grows up
    In the southside of the chi
    Its windy its cold
    Children scream-Guns shot ring
    Fengar High has just let out
    Someone has been beat
    Father is drunk
    Beats on his wife
    Dislocates her shoulder
    Knocks the children out
    Goes to the club cheats on his wife
    Comes back home beats on his wife
    Smacks his children
    Wow what a life
    Mother divorces him
    He cries like a bi---
    Ill change Ill change
    He still screaming that sh--
    Grow up with no father just a memory
    But that memory tainted
    With beatings and crying
    Young memory tainted
    So when this man comes along one day
    tries to walk back into there lives
    Children grown now
    All they think about
    He beat my mother
    He beat me
    He cheat it on my mother
    He beat me
    He hurt my mother
    He beat me
    Im a bad motherfu---
    Lucky for him the Lord Has Saved Me!!!
    Thank You!!!!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !!!
    felt all the deepness and the anger of pain through this joint
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Brother
    Your Love & Support is felt
    And heard-Much Love Poet
     
  4. Onichika

    Onichika Active Member MEMBER

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    Yah that was deep I felt it.

    Forgiveness is trait I can't see,
    while still living in so much misery,
    but the benifits are free,
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise brutha chi-town likewise.........
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You 4 The Love Onichika
    Sometimes I have to put thing in perspective
    You Know
    And of course Brother $$RICH$$
    Now I aint gone keep Thanking You
    Just kidding-Black Unity is the key to success
     
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    to notorious tantrum....

    really felt you on this piece i just wanted to say the other night. or tues i appreciate you touching the subject about rape and molestation. it needs to be talked about so we wont be the ones crying or in jail.
     
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    Being the bigger person, says a lot...
    and you spoke volumns, and the sun do shine in everyone's life...watch for the sunset.
    it was deeply felt
     
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    blessings....Desert Storm make it plain!
     
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    Truly feelin' that piece...........
     
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