Black Poetry : My long gone Babys MOM

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  1. MAGNUS

    MAGNUS Member MEMBER

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    Have you ever laid back
    and closed your eyes

    Took a few moments
    to gently visualize

    That love who I swear to God
    Makes you sigh, cry
    and your blood pressure rise?

    With every passing thought
    I question my life as I
    gaze in amazement at her
    light brown eyes.

    Tick Tock, Tick Tock
    Two seconds pass and I
    find myself high.

    Like no story ever told on the silver screen.
    The truth of this scene is no matter how frequent
    I see what I see
    the feelings that transpose
    are never routine.

    I miss her mental face
    the way she was shaped
    and most of all the memories we make.

    That women to me was a blessing you
    see. Separated by space, time and
    difference of mind. nevertheless
    my love is blind.

    That women to me was more
    than a lover, Peer or wife, she was
    my friend.
    I see her every time I sleep and
    ever time a new day begins
    I see her when I look in the mirror
    and scrub my face
    because my baby`s mom made
    me the man I am today...
     
    MAGNUS, Apr 16, 2001
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  2. Destee

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    such a beautiful tribute
    so nice to see "Baby's Mom"
    given such love
    thank you for sharing her with us

    please make yourself at home
    as you are amongst friends & family

    :heart:

    Destee
     
    Destee, Apr 16, 2001
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  3. 8th wonder

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    What a beatiful tribute.....very nice indeed.
    Welcome to the family...

    8th!
     
    8th wonder, Apr 16, 2001
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    Such a beautiful peace :)

    Welcome to the "House Of Flow"
    Where all notepads sit at the kitchen table
    Next to the coffee pot and other consciously
    Flavoured drinks that quench the throats of the
    Thirsty

    Continue to scribe poet!!

    *drink*
     
    Hunter, Apr 16, 2001
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    MAGNUS....

    1st of all... this peace was touching... to say the least.

    very few men would admit the things that you just so
    wonderfully expressed... Thank You!!

    2nd... Welcome Home Poet!!... you are mos def in good company! :)

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
    GA_Sunshyne, Apr 16, 2001
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    HERE IS

    A WARM WELCOME FROM FLIGHT 747~~~~
    POET DES BE BEAUTIFUL AND YES I'VE
    BEEN DOWN THE ROAD MANY TYMES
    THANK U FOR SUCH A WARM VISION
     
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  7. MAGNUS

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    Thank you for the love.
     
    MAGNUS, Apr 17, 2001
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