Black Poetry : My little poemy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Feb 11, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gitty up! and lets have a ride...
    Lets start with a nice flow.....
    With a few select words we
    increase the road..
    up we goooooooooo
    Do you want a nice romantic hold
    or a dark dramatic glow.......
    Can you catch up with tha speed
    the depth......
    if not....
    inhail...
    and try again.
    Let me show you how many
    ways there are................
    We gallop in to our vocabulary..
    knowledge of words.....
    prhaseology..
    and jump over the clerricall errors.
    We vernice our last line before
    the finish line..............
    Our Destheenation is in Space...
    cause this is not a horse Race...
    Just a wonderfull creative expression
    from
    youre
    heart.....
    from
    youre
    Place.....
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    then,
    allow me to mount
    the speeding mare
    who vernice the last line
    as i take my time
    to mutilate the vernacular
    like dracula
    looking for the red wine
    one
    more
    time
    'til i reach the last line
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks baller.......
    i like youre poems.....realy they are beautifull
    i have to admit that i have to look in my dictionary book for the word vernaculair.....because i am not from tha states...and i,m learning new words..here....

    thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very well written and u pose the vision of my eye
     
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