Black Poetry : My Little Gift

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gayluv, Oct 9, 2003.

  1. gayluv

    gayluv Active Member MEMBER

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    Wow!
    Your finally here!
    Seems like it took forever,
    but GOD I'm so happy!

    For nine months I carried you,
    neatly tucked under my heart,
    you would move swiftly,
    caress my insides,
    to let me know you heard me
    my little gift
    my little melody
    mommy's life you are

    When you screamed into the world
    tears fell from my eyes
    like raindrops
    they did
    one look
    was all in took
    to reassure me
    you were mine
    forever and a day
    eyez pure as gold
    skin soft as ebony
    my little gift
    my little angelic
    love!
     
  2. islander

    islander Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is beautiful. Thank you for blessing us with your blessings.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet and beautiful
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
     
  5. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Birth... truly the crescendo of Life's song.

    Beautiful
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...
     
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    this is so beautiful....there is nothing like new life
    to make a person completely re-evaluate life and see
    through a new pair of eyes...whether the child is yours
    or some else......new life has a way shining a light into
    your heart...like nothing else on this earth...

    this one touched me deeply...thank you for this!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Circle Life!

    Babies are God's way of saying that life should go on...
    That is a wonderful story to share with us...so sweet and heartwarming, my baby is grown with a baby, but I still remember nuzzling that peach fuzz on the top of his head all sandy red and that sweet "new baby" smell!

    Blessings On Ya House!:angel1:
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this reminds me of my best friend for some reason, cuz she had a baby and Im sure she feels/felt the same way. beautiful flow...
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful JUST beautiful...
    congratulations my sista :)
     
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