Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Little Child

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Apr 10, 2004.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sweet little child.
    I miss you even though I never got a chance to know you.
    I often wonder who you would of looked like, your father or I.
    That's something I'll never get a chance to know.
    I'll never see see you smile.
    The first time you laugh, I'll never hear you cry.
    I'll never get a chance to hear your first words.
    The first time you walk, you first day of school.
    That was all taken from us.
    How I miss you so.
    There is a whole in my heart.
    Inside I can't seem to stop crying.
    Our time together never came to pass.
    I still miss you,think about you, long to hold you in my arms.
    Even if it was just for a moment.
    To be able to hold you in my arms.
    To be able to see your sweet little face.
    Your mother loves you very much.
    I miss you even though I never got a chance to know you.
     
  2. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You will always be connected no matter what.
    Nice flow nice show of emotions.
    I hear you but your missed little on is
    now your :angel1: always with you.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so heartfelt, I could feel the ache in the words. I agree with thatgirl, the bond is for always.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply warm heart felt piece
    i really feel u
     
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