Quiet Poetry Lounge : ...My 'Lil Sister...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jul 29, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She woke up this morning
    More beautiful than anything
    A night of moanin’ and groanin’
    Has her body achin’ endlessly
    She has a body that girls die for
    And she flaunts it with the clothes she has
    Little does she know that men only want her for
    The purest body parts that she should have
    But she’s a young, dumb girl
    Not by the books or common sense
    She’s dumb to think she can take on the world
    But in a few years she’ll see it as nonsense
    But by then she’ll probably be pregnant
    Wonderin’ what she should do
    That young girl is my sister
    And she’s only 10 years true…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    dis was whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummmmmmmmmm........are you in shock rich???????? lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it took me by storm , yeap ! shock like whoaaaaaaaa!!!!!
     
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    your words
    of wisdom
    will help
    guide her
    strenght to you
    and your little sister
    many blessing
    Peace my sister
    Peace
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its usually does that to people rich......


    thanks bluewater for the encouraging words...
     
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    yeah! but with your knowledge & wisdom
    she will come to grip and see the path which
    u lead children has this wild ride of vision
    she's blessed to have a sister like you
    i know i am glad to have a sistah like you
    poetically beside me as we continue our
    spray of wordz to the world for better life
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats so sweet of you to say :D
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa...well at least she gotz u...set her straight gurl :)
     
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    Deep Love Slept Here...
     
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