Black Poetry : MY LIFE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by da TRUTH, Oct 21, 2006.

  1. da TRUTH

    da TRUTH Member MEMBER

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    My life is like a roller coaster it goes up and down.
    Your able to see the hurt on my face because it remains a frown.
    So who do i turn to for this pain?
    A doctor is unable to cure,
    My life has cause me to hate and my HEART is no longer PURE.
    I AM a child of GOD trying so hard to bare this PAIN.
    WHEN do I get to see sunshine?
    cause everyday im fellin RAIN,
    Crying so much that i can START my own OCEAN,
    MEAN while im wishing i can FAST forward my life in fast motion.
    butterflies that use to fly in my stomach, from the site of excitement must be DEAD.I dont even have allergies yet my eyes stay swollen and blood shot RED.
    They say you weap what you sooo
    and what goes around comes back to you,
    I know im not suppose to question GOD.
    But have MERCY on me,WHAT did i do?
    To deserve this pain, anger, and confusion.
    IF I HAD TO DIE AND COME BACK THIS BODY I WONT BE CHOOSEN.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    within the darkness is light
    that heart of pain needs caressin
    every tear drops joy will come
    for that body is a gift to behold.

    feeling you deeply here..............
     
  3. Key-L

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    I know of what you talk.
    Some days are really churning,
    Thanks to god for hope.

    Go strong. keep flowin
    Key-l
     
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    thanks for da luv and support,
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I REALLY WAS FEELIN THIS DROPE, IN THIS POEM U WERE EXPRESSING THE FEELINGS THAT I HAVE, SO FLOW ON WIT NONSTOP,
    KEEP EXPRESSIN THE TRUTH

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the flow and the idea--by the way--you are supposed to question--whether it is God or anyone--question--because only by questioning will you ever have a chance at receiving answers--Amun-Ra
     
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