Black Haiku : My Life

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Akilah, Mar 18, 2006.

  1. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As some streams do flow
    So the currents of my life
    An endless eddy...:sand:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Currents often wave
    like life itself in motion
    always endlessly
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    beautiful piece....very flowing...very concise.
     
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    In tides also waves
    my life shift gracefully in
    upon shores endless
     
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