Quiet Poetry Lounge : My L-I-F-E-S-T-Y-L-E in P-E-R-S-P-E-C-T-I-V-E

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, Dec 6, 2005.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that someone i spoke of,
    prayed for,
    and slept every sleepless night thinking of,
    is who i found.
    tenderly calling,
    wishing me stay,
    though sometimes i couldn't come to grip.
    we inner locked knowledge,
    and life,
    like we smoothly lock our lips.
    do you believe in magic,
    can we soar,
    can we be what you prayed for too?
    pull me out of the magicians hat,
    fall down on your knees--then rise,
    to see me next to you.
    trying and dying to,
    fulfill and satisfy you,
    in every way.
    causes me to look her in her eye,
    and find what i have been searching for,
    when i thought my mind had lost its way.
    she touched my soul,
    and raised my head,
    gave me nourishment,
    when i was almost dead.
    the vibe of commoness,
    wasn't of change,
    but the simple fact that love,
    could actually remain.............
    remain in this body,
    that others tried to feel,
    kept contained inside themselves,
    that unleveled love field.
    i was able :run: it,
    like an olympic athlete,
    she was and is the wind,
    that makes everything worth while--at my life's track meet.
    taking things as they are,
    as they aren't,
    and what they'll be.
    causes her to become the undoubtable,
    one and only one,
    that can make me complete.
    you think because of reasons,
    that i would feel uneasy,
    or maybe reminisce like Bilal.
    but i fret not my living,
    for i love her,
    do not bound me for my lifestyle!:nono:
    if chains must come,
    to lock and take me away,
    from what i am.
    then let the person that does it,
    be me,
    let me by mine own hands be d*mned.
    being able to see beyond,
    the four walls of my limits.
    i found and find my self growing,
    like a miracle bush in a Colorado's winter.
    laughter non-mechanical,
    showing so so much affection.
    that no ones view of right or wrong,
    can detour me from her loves lesson.
    you may forget me,
    you may condemn or kill me,
    for being who i feel.
    but whether you do,
    or you don't,
    let it be known that I LIVED BEING REAL.....




    dedicated to my lil frosted flake :kiss2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was fuzzy warm sweet & mild
    all smiles .....very nice................
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this a tyte flow flow on poet.
     
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    Sometimes we have to come to grips with ourselves, and just love us for us, and that's exactly what you do. Let your heart guide you poet, i love this drop!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin this post again it has so much meaning.....
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i appreciate the love once again RICH, sometimes the things people might say about us that worries us only worries us because we won't come to grip (words from tashatoya) with the fact that love is love in any form.
     
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    I guess sometimes we have to just let things simply be. I felt much warmth in this piece.