Black Poetry : My Kitchen is CLOSED

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night and the nights before
    My kitchen was closed
    When will you pick up the hint?
    I got a new keeper of my heart
    Makes my soul dance when he holds me
    Comforting me, where you couldn’t
    Loving me in ways, I thought I never feel
    Bring me alive, when I thought I was dead
    My kitchen is closed and I am moving on
    My love don’t live here no more
    Open your eyes and see the writing on the WALL
    My love is gone
    See, I am not worried where you
    Lay your hat or eat your meals
    My kitchen is closed
    See, last night and nights before
    The kitchen was closed
    And bedroom door was locked
    I got a new keeper of my heart
    Who loves me for me
    Not trying to change me
    And not trying to keep me in the kitchen
    And cleaning up after him
    The kitchen is closed
    My kitchen been closed for years
    And you wont catch the hint.

    :censored: the kitchen is closed!!


    (c) 2005
    New Blues
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Snaps on this one. If someone is determined to stay in a dark kitchen with nothing waiting for them but a bunch of stale leftovers in the refrigerator, then that's sad, and tired. The words and phrasing made a bullseye, great write.
     
  3. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl this was tyte.

    telling it like it is....cause some people can't take a hint....


    I really enjoyed reading this one
     
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    That person needs to get the hint..its closed
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Men...

    All some men think about is them pantrys. :haha:

    I'm just saying... Love your work!
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MBA your poems always get to me..i love your scribes.. :luvv:
     
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    Well said my poet.
    I like how yousaid this
    Someone needs to take the hint
    and I am glad that you got a new love :spinn:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa! shut down closed up get lost wow!
    this deep depth was mad hot whewwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all happy you enjoyed

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mann...

    No cornbread and honey tonight hunh? That was the a nice way to put something that can be so belittling to :uzi: another. Or the dumfounded ones! :?:
     
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