Black Poetry : My Kinda Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rootzpoet, Sep 13, 2007.

  1. rootzpoet

    rootzpoet New Member MEMBER

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    I like the kind of woman,
    Who’s independent?
    One who can make a decision?
    Without a man’s consent,
    You know the kind of woman,
    who’s pleasing to the eye,
    And pleasing to di “I”.
    The kind of woman who is a,
    deep thinker,
    with superior intelligence
    She’s even a bit of a philosopher.
    And she can appreciate the simple things,
    Like beachside walks on moonlit evenings.
    I like the kind of woman who is way past
    Outward beauty,
    Yet she puts herself together, a real cutie.
    The type who will sit with me
    Listen intently as I read her poetry.
    A well read sister on a higher plain
    Who appreciates, some Marley, Tosh, Beres, Nina Simone
    Billie Holiday and some Coltrane
    A head in the clouds hopeless romantic
    At the same time a level headed,
    Well grounded love-a-holic.
    Who is addicted to my love,
    Cause that’s one thing she’ll
    Have an endless supply of.
    I like the kind of woman
    Who will not take dirt,
    Cause she knows exactly
    What she is worth.
    One who can handle herself capably
    Mix it up, rough it up,
    But still keep her dignity.
    She is a queen who, when she does her thing,
    Makes her man know he is a king.
    I like the kind of sister,
    Who can make me live in
    A state of bliss,
    Make me see paradise with
    A honey coated kiss.
    I like a woman who is confident in herself,
    And when she takes care of business,
    her man would be foolish to go anywhere else.
    Yeah that’s my kinda woman!!
     
  2. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    Well Now

    King rootzpoet,

    She's out there waiting and preparing for u...:pc:
    That's one thing, as a HOPEFUL romantic I believe that is true...:rolleyes:
    Sadly, she's been over looked because when some feast their eyes they see a blur...:driveby:
    Loosely translated, those who asked before, got just what they wanted, and didn't know what to do with her...:SuN019:
    That's typically the case for most of us good women today...
    But something tells me you're different, u won't treat your blessed Queen that way...

    Awesome Write Poet... Flow On... Keep On...
     
  3. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice words

    if you can't find her make her.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When that kinda woman meets that kinda man, the entire universe smiles and sighs. Nothing wrong with knowing what you want, and I liked the way your wants were conveyed. She exists.
    Welcome to Destee.com. Familiarize yourself with our poetic rules of etiquette, http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896 . Give poetic love and support to other poets, as they give the same to you. Looking forward to reading more from you.
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling you poet

    can you tell me where i can find this type of woman?

    lol


    peace
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rootzpoet:
    I loved this to the last line.
    Absolutely lovely
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome rootzpoet to Destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    this was awesomely done and my kinda womannnn!!!!!!
     
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