Black Poetry : My Island Boy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Fatima, May 30, 2004.

  1. Fatima

    Fatima Member MEMBER

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    undefinedundefinedundefined :spinstar: The sent of jasmine filled the dim lit room as I layed stretched out on satin sheets, Jon Lucien cradled our minds as we sipped Blackberry wine I promissed I was his to keep,we rocked the night away.....:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd & said
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I haven't listened to John Lucien in quite a while. You create such realistic scenes.
     
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    your words are like love parables in a sense

    so meaningful with few words said
    have me wanting more
     
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    this was some of the smoothest verse...
    I've read in a long time...
    I absolutely loved this scribe...

    Encore :spinstar:
     
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