Black Poetry : My introduction...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Eastwood_7106, Jun 24, 2004.

  1. Eastwood_7106

    Eastwood_7106 New Member MEMBER

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    Let me introduce myself/
    tha last four digits of my name itself/
    is a reprensentation of tha rules I follow because of all the pain I felt/
    from shady homies/
    to family members that change on me/
    my own neighberhood's against me because I went off to college/
    to soak up game and receive more knowlege/
    But I know, i'm not tha only with problems/
    everyone knows pain/
    walking aimlessly through tha showers so your tears can blend in with tha rain/
    but f.uck being down because I don't appeal/
    to what some think is keepin it real/
    I got dreams to lead a black nation away from hating, i'm trying to build/
    19 years old on some grown man sh.it/
    been broke too long tryna elevate out that po man sh.it/

    .....what do y'all think......
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi:wave: and welcome
    I feel your flow is coming strong
    you want o speak on real life issue
    laying into the text
    hey , we are down and ready
    to feel your thoughts
    so let the flow go
    go ahead and flow more
    we ain't got nothing but love
    for ya
    welcome
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
    Please take the time to read and post to the Poetic Etiquette thread
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896
    keep the flows coming
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey likes ya drop
    welcome to the family
    hope to read more
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well I think if you can walk that walk, like you talk that talk...then I think/know you got it going on.
    Welcome to the place where our cup runith over...with luv.
    I like what you dropped...cause you droped the right stuff...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop poet
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    as we unite in poetic unity flow on ! ya home
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eastwood_7106,
    Peace be unto you
    Your expression came in real clear
    i think it's gone be alright......
    Soon as we
    Do what we're suppose to be doing
    until then it's gone be real hectic.........

    Like your poem
    Peace and Blessings
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome home :grouphug:
    Yes indeed you have a story to tell my brotha...let the words take you far and may you be healed here at home cause HERE is now yours to call home :) :grouphug:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome! It sounds like your trying to elevate and educate self, nothing wrong with that, and I like the way you brought this.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to the fam!!:wave:
     
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    Welcome... :wave:
    I think you have a lot to say...
    Make yourself at home here
    at Destee.com.... :toast:
    Continue to share with us...
    we're listening...
     
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