Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Influence

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ExquisiteBalla, Jan 10, 2003.

  1. ExquisiteBalla

    ExquisiteBalla Member MEMBER

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    When my pen leaks
    My mind speaks
    Streaming words so unique
    They captivate minds for weeks.
    The aura I project and initiate
    Makes negativity
    Evaporate and disintegrate.
    activating lyrics that deprecate
    where hate originates.
    Mental bliss is what I instigate
    To anyone reading this
    With a enough insight
    To give a blind man
    Spectacles of happiness.
    So as the truth remains
    Realizations proclaim
    That from my stupendous brain
    Not one idiom
    Could be deemed inane.
    The thoughts I elect to eject
    The way they connect
    fascinates minds
    One line at a time
    Lexis so sublime
    They bring oohs and aahs
    From mutes and mimes.
    They way I construct
    With my dialect
    Makes me look like
    A vernacular architect
    Mentally captivating
    When you’d least expect
    With rhymes in shackles
    Each and every word in check
    Couldn’t find an error
    Would you like to inspect?
    I Mesmerize and hypnotize
    With each and every
    Word I exercise
    Enthrall and entrance
    Beyond your envisioned demands
    Every heard of eye candy?
    Well this is a sugar attack to you eyes.
    I’ll never subside
    That’s the black man’s demise
    My vernacular mascots
    Stupefy intellectual hotshots
    Have then flabbergasted like robots
    Circuits staggering in sheer shock.
    The way my words reign
    Stimulate and emancipate
    Accelerate and invigorate
    I leave negativity docile
    Evil thoughts just evaporate.
    So know when Ray comes in
    Edifying Flabbergasting begins
    I send geniuses run for pens
    As they inhale my thoughts
    Like the wind.
    My Influence
    Email Me
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    oh' yes

    dat's what i'm talking bout
    welcome wit such beautiful flow
    welcome upon family u know
    welcome to destee's place
    write ya line flow let it go
    welcome to dis place of luv
    like joy touched from above
    welcome welcome welcome!!!!!!!!:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...a sugar attack to your eyes...

    Your flows are extremely tight.
     
  4. ExquisiteBalla

    ExquisiteBalla Member MEMBER

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    Thank's Rich
    through your words
    your flow is high pitch
    and Sista Steele
    your lyrical might
    definitely brings light.
     
  5. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sister this is very well written and blessings to your pen.
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaay ExquisitesOne :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Thank you for joining us and sharing your flows !!

    Please take a moment and read this thread.

    Again, thanks a bunch and welcome !!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. ExquisiteBalla

    ExquisiteBalla Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Ashanta
    I'm feeling your style also
    I'm a guy with a pen
    That orchestrates the thoughts within.
     
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