Black Poetry : My ideas?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its not my ideas in this peice,but
    The the sorrow and agony thats deep within me
    Its not my mind that bellows these thoughts
    but my heart that bleeds of pain and loss
    It aint even me thats typing these keys
    Its the tears that flow from my eyes with ease!
    I always thought that it was me you see!

    Today I realized its emotions that makes things happen
    I found out I loosing a loved one and the pen just kept on tappen!
    So no credit for me and my suppose to be talent
    Lets applaud my heart, for its sorrowful ballet
    No, No its not my ideas in this peice
    Only MY SOUL, MY MANHOOD as it weeps!
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very heartfelt I'm feeling this had me picturing the tears...good write
    peace for now but much luv always
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You held this down THEONE

    and welcome to the Destee family!!! :grouphug:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u had da cross bow down pak
    tyte write flow on
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the :heart: speaks...we must listen, wether we want to or not.
     
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    oh...my

    this was so touching...

    true poetry...flows from the soul...
     
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    Wow, this is incredibly moving. Peace, my friend.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, when your soul writes, we can't help but read. Like the flow.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks

    Thnaks, THaks THANKS
     
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