Black Poetry : My Hoop Dreams

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eve found herself suddenly surrounded by white jerseys

    and was quite discouraged

    devin :

    come on Eve

    give it up

    [reaching for the ball]

    [looking past her man]

    where’s my man

    oh!! there he is

    she nods to Howard

    Howard nods back

    vince :

    no way you guys come back

    no way

    howard :

    alright Vince

    keep talking , keep talking

    [referee blows whistle]

    walking!!!!!!

    eve :

    what!!!!!!!!

    fan :

    what do you expect

    they’re playing in New Jersey

    [while bringing the ball up the court]

    richard :

    by the way Eve

    i love your new jersey

    eve :

    thanks Richard

    coach :

    that’s okay Eve

    keep looking to attack the basket

    eve :

    let’s go guys

    let’s get a stop this time

    Howard looks at the scoreboard

    Atlanta Hawks 94

    New jersey Nets 110

    [noticing Howard]

    eve :

    don’t worry Howard , we’re going to win

    okay you two

    [Mike teasing]


    don’t forget your teammates

    al :

    they can’t help it Mike

    they’re the only two on the team that dates

    eve :

    he’s right you know

    mike :

    of course Eve

    but the next time Howard passes you the ball

    wait for the pick and roll

    he’ll stick to your goals

    [meanwhile while guarding Vince]

    all i’ve been shooting is bricks

    josh :

    that’s cause you’re concentrating on a role

    she’s your chick

    right?

    [Howard nods]


    well go for it

    she’ll dig your soul

    [Howard intercepts a pass]

    Eve!!!!!!!!!!!

    okay baby

    here i come

    [Eve & Howard turn around]

    thanks Mike

    thanks Josh

    Howard tosses the ball to Joe

    as they start a 3 on 1 fastbreak

    joe :

    so what do you want Eve

    an alley oop?

    eve :

    sure, throw it off the glass

    [turns to Howard]

    can she really do that?

    Howard shrugs

    hey, you asked

    turns back to Eve

    joe :

    okay Eve , here goes

    tosses the ball up into the air

    as it bounces off the backboard

    Eve jumps up and slams it through the hoop

    eve :

    see guys

    no problem

    [turns to Howard]

    what a lass

    [Howard smiles]

    i know




    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this Howard...Its been a while sice I hear about you and Eve as well...So how is she?????:D
    I can tell by this here yall are doing great things!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    working it correctly ...tyte drop in da mix here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is Eve doing a bit of show boating? Perhaps, but everyone loves it, especially Howard, huh? Creatively done.
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we are platinumillty1 :shades:


    thanks guys :em3600:
     
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