Black Poetry : My Hiatus (The Remix)

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yet another song
    It's been too long
    Since I blew my horn (oh yeah)

    You're on
    Word is born
    Wack option up ~
    Since the phat girl sung (old news)

    Yo' Muse,
    Ya comin' son?
    I'm home alone (paying dues)

    I need another one
    The gig ain't done
    Until my maker calls (the bridge)

    Undone,
    Sing alongs,
    My hiatus been
    Way too long

    Nightfalls,
    There goes the sun
    At the crack of dawn

    Wit' asunder rays (mad attack)
    A brother got his rhytym back
    My hiatus got to wait
    Thank God, a "G" is straight...

    In a better off cul de sac
    Place sharp as a tack
    Rat-a-tat-tat-tat
    Hope ya'll feelin' dat

    Edited while ya slept
    Story about coming back (from slack)
    Unified back to back
    A vision of where it's at
    In fact...
    Bringin' it back to BLACK




    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    nice flow...i like it...
    i enjoy reading you
    :angel1:
     
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    glad to see you back
    black...:)
    peace
    khasm
     
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    the haitus, huh

    taking on many forms...
    we all have it ...sometimes
    as it...
    interrupts the opportunity to scribe...
    feeling the flow...warrior...
     
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    tyte drop happy ya back black in Rhythmmmmm!!
    flow on
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two gods plus two angels...

    What more could a brother wish 4, thanks!
     
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    Thank you, for your ear
    Eye, and beauty
    My Queen
     
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    you are so sweet..most welcome 1poetsought:angel1:
     
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    LOVING IT!

    How my ears and my heart strained
    to hear that sweet refrain
    That resonates from your tunes to my
    brain, and the majic lyrics flow like
    blood in my veins
    What a sight for sore eyes to behold
    Now the teller of the story is back
    it can be told!
    Loving this time you come and rhyme
    When you come and symbolically take
    a seat inside my mind...
    By the way your horn sounds sublime!
    So glad I didn't have to stand in line...
    Cause this is a majical mystical lyrical
    time!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    Happy Thanksgiving!
     
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