Black Poetry : my heart

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by henryx40, Mar 15, 2001.

  1. henryx40

    henryx40 Member MEMBER

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    though i'm a man of many years
    i have cried bitter tears
    and seen fear
    when you walked away

    i've stated my point of view
    explained just how much i love you
    or should i drop down on my knees for you
    i'd be your fool
    if you let me

    give to you

    my heart
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    henry....

    i'm glad i didn't miss this one!

    simply stated... it is oh-so sweet!
    heart-felt & straightforward...
    i likes!! thanks for sharing.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold on brother....She hears and she will respond.
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    henryx

    niiiice and smooth, brotha; and yeah, it's good to be at the poet's 'hideout'.

    S
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    begging for love will never do
    coming from a man deserving as you
    perhaps you've misunderstood her replies
    or thought that her silence implied
    she didn't want the love that you have
    give me her number and i'll find out right fast

    :)

    very very very nice Henry

    so good to have you back again

    Destee
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice

    very, very nice, indeed :)

    A
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I do declair for this was a page from my heart book ....well stated
    sweet and to the point .......keep speaking on it
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, I felt this poet deep.
     
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