Black Poetry : My heart was looking for ya...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Oct 8, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I walked endless hours trough the sand....
    looking for youre footsteps...
    I watched lonely Sunsets...
    in the Hope i could see a glimp of youre Aura...
    I collected hundred of stones...
    in the hope i would find our Names carved in it...
    I watched out over the sideline....
    in the hope i would find a message in a bottle...
    I picked up several of shelfs....
    and put them on my ears Longing and hoping to hear youre Voice..
    I swimmed circles in the sea....
    hopefully you would come out of the water...

    I sat there on the beach...
    finaly the agony made me fall asleep...
    That night i woke up...
    my eyes were hazy...
    and i layed there crying.....
    i could heard the waves Silently..
    and the soft breeze..
    I just layed there and looked up to the Stars...
    it was beautifull..
    thinking...
    ..
    ..
    why couldnt you just lay down here with me.....

    ...

    lay here...

    and kiss...

    and be Love...

    and be Loved...

    and love....

    and loving eachother...




    but i realised....




    he is not here.......
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so nice...sad too
    but i like the flow...
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if he is not with you...then he does not know happiness :)
    carry on my sista :)
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love to you for the beauty you expressed in this...the imagery is wonderful.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!
    i like dis he will rise now after this flow
    tyteee!!
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sweet poets ...Trinity...he probebly does know happyness and he should be... happyness is all that i wish for him and more...

    rich ....probebly not........cause he doesnt even know me...

    he is just somewhere ........Out there...

    I hope you know what i mean with this...
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice...
     
  8. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    I like this very much....I loved all the imagery and that I could see everything....I can totally relate..Tight piece....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great visuals. Bitter sweet.
     
  10. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful
     
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